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Wow! So much, and with such feeling. 
posted by
TAPS.
on April 9, 2016 at 10:06 PM
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Strong emotions and effect; Very well done, Dear Kabu!
Human relationships are so complicated and convoluted at times..
posted by
Katray2
on April 9, 2016 at 6:52 PM
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Kabu
Very touching! You give voice to something we all have experienced at one time or another - and have caused others to experience it...
posted by
Nautikos
on April 9, 2016 at 4:09 PM
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Beautiful and touching ... Love n hate happens at times if people didn't
Pay attention
so FOCUS on any relation gets better and can avoid the circle of drama and could be more passionate and inspiring
posted by
Star5_
on April 9, 2016 at 12:45 PM
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So difficult and sat it is when the passion goes away. I have seen and heard of that happening many a time.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on April 9, 2016 at 5:28 AM
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If that doesn't tell what a girl goes through, I don't think anything can.
All it would take sometimes is just a hug, just "I hear you, and you're absolutely right." Seems so unattainable. I hope I heard my kids. But look at what a beautiful, caring, phenomenal woman you are! ♥
posted by
Pat_B
on April 9, 2016 at 4:26 AM
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If that doesn't tell what a girl goes through, I don't think anything can.
All it would take sometimes is just a hug, just "I hear you, and you're absolutely right." Seems so unattainable. I hope I heard my kids. But look at what a beautiful, caring, phenomenal woman you are! ♥
posted by
Pat_B
on April 9, 2016 at 4:26 AM
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Parents don't mean to hurt, but they can sure be suffocating by times - this I was told by my daughter. (Gulp! Did she mean me??) I can feel what you're saying in this poem, although I never really had to live through it. I can remember my girlfirends saying much the same, but less eloquently.
posted by
adnohr
on April 8, 2016 at 6:51 PM
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nice poem
posted by
Lanetay
on April 8, 2016 at 4:36 PM
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Much frustration, I sense, in this poem, and it sounds like you tried so very hard; that I can feel throughout the poem. The last line clenches it. Beautifully told.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on April 8, 2016 at 3:41 PM
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Kabuiepie-;)~
That person was so alone and unheard in her life, where had love gone? I love you.
posted by
WileyJohn
on April 8, 2016 at 3:39 PM
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posted by
lovelyladymonk
on April 8, 2016 at 2:04 PM
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A deep sad poem first written I would guess when you were very young. A young girl crying out for comfort after being betrayed by her own passionate being.
posted by
C_C_T
on April 8, 2016 at 11:29 AM
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