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Re: Re: Re: Rpresta
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 16, 2016 at 7:23 PM
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Re: Very beautifully heartfelt!
Thanks so much!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 10, 2016 at 3:23 PM
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Re: Re: Rpresta
I don't think I would have dared RP.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 10, 2016 at 10:39 AM
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Very beautifully heartfelt!
posted by
Katray2
on March 10, 2016 at 8:01 AM
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Re: C_C_T
Thank you. You know, I wish you had written it also! LOL!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 9, 2016 at 5:51 PM
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Re: Nautikos
Spot on, again! Yes, I can see that, and here is a possible reason why that is so. I once read that people who started out writing rhyming poetry still continue a bit with that cadence when transferring to writing free verse. Also, if one has written lyrics, that could be the case. In reality, the music is always there, a part of me, playing in the background of my mind. My mother, in addition to singing to us, read rhyming children's poetry to me as a toddler; I graduated to reading most of a book of hers, The Greatest Poems of the English Language, or something like that, at 9-10 years of age, which was also rhyming poetry. The first poems I "composed" (and that's a stretch - LOL) were rhyming poems/lyrics, long, long ago. Often, music and lyrics are playing in my head as a compose whatever writes itself. And my dad, in case anyone wonders, was a voracious reader, but not of poetry!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 9, 2016 at 5:18 PM
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Re: BonBon333
Glad, glad, glad! Thanks.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 9, 2016 at 4:56 PM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you. It is different.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 9, 2016 at 4:55 PM
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Re: Re: Re: Kabu
Yes, we do, and we try our best. Maybe I need a new broom! LOL!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 9, 2016 at 4:54 PM
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Re: BC-A
I think we all do - wish for just one more day!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 9, 2016 at 4:52 PM
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Re: FSI
I guess that could be quite a visual, 'eh?
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 9, 2016 at 4:50 PM
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i LOVE LOVE THIS POEM 
posted by
BonBon333
on March 9, 2016 at 4:36 PM
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It really captures the imagination and makes one want to read it again. Fascinating.
posted by
TAPS.
on March 9, 2016 at 4:13 PM
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RP
Your poetry often has a melodic sense...And again, as Wiley also observed - this one also makes me think of a very slow, soft melody...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 9, 2016 at 3:38 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu
Lol...you are welcome with love. We white witches have our ways...we work with God.
posted by
Kabu
on March 9, 2016 at 9:53 AM
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That's just as a new day. She probably hopes for another.
posted by
BC-A
on March 9, 2016 at 6:42 AM
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It makes for good poetry RP. I wish I had written it first.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 9, 2016 at 6:35 AM
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The image of the dripping tears really jumps out at me.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 9, 2016 at 5:35 AM
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Re:WileyJohn
Thank you very, very much.
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 8, 2016 at 5:09 PM
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RPresta
Should be set to music, just lovely.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 8, 2016 at 4:15 PM
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Re: Kabu
OMG! That's how I look!!!! Who is she? Thank you!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 8, 2016 at 3:50 PM
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Re: texdypoet52
Thank you a bunch!
posted by
Sea_Gypsy
on March 8, 2016 at 3:45 PM
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fabulous. such imagery
posted by
Kabu
on March 8, 2016 at 3:25 PM
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Amazing!
posted by
teddypoet52
on March 8, 2016 at 2:01 PM
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