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Re: Re: Kabu

posted by Kabu on February 1, 2016 at 6:10 PM | link to this | reply

Re: RPresta

RP.My Father was brought up by the dominant Aunt she said to my Father's girl friend, (my Mother). Her feet were wet ,'Take your shoes and socks off, I won't take any notice if your feet are dirty.) I thought I had wrapped this up for Ciel.

posted by C_C_T on February 1, 2016 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Bill

Gotcha

posted by C_C_T on February 1, 2016 at 10:24 AM | link to this | reply

I thought you said so much here and especially like the last line. I agreed with Ciel in wishing to know more. Perhaps a Part II of the poe? Real or imaginary works for me!

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 1, 2016 at 9:56 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Ciel

I agree.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 1, 2016 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Nautikos

You are making me laugh, being brought up RC.

posted by Sea_Gypsy on February 1, 2016 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply

Believe by the hour sir.

posted by BC-A on February 1, 2016 at 8:54 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Ciel

/Well Ciel a lot of my poems do not make for easy reading. So I have been stripping them and trying to knock the meaning out into words. I mean it is no use writing stuff that does not gel if anyone takes the time to read it, the author should try harder.Not that there is really any incentive do this as I do not live in poetry and have only read a bit of Dylan Thomas. Poetry written on blogit is usually special to those who write it and One should if possible try to encourage them unless ----

Honestly I thought this poem was now self explanatory. However imagine you had been

deprived of your natural instincts just like the young lady in your book. For some reason you were trapped in an impossible situation. Your mind races each day to find a solution

when the obvious one has died brutally. Seeking a modicum of comfort you exploit your imagination, You do not tend to a herd of Bison. You seek comfort by being creative. Of course the flaw is obvious, perfection is not a human quality. The day for judgment always looms perilously. In fact one tries to manufacture emotion. OK.

posted by C_C_T on February 1, 2016 at 8:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Well I might have to sit in the cateteria Naut. The church is being useful when not engaged in normal pursuits.

posted by C_C_T on February 1, 2016 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Another space ship episode.

posted by C_C_T on February 1, 2016 at 7:47 AM | link to this | reply

Lanetay

Thank you dear, keep smiling.

posted by C_C_T on February 1, 2016 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

I often feel there are stories dancing behind your poems, and I want to know them, to know the poems better.

posted by Ciel on January 31, 2016 at 8:04 PM | link to this | reply

You were able to get out the words very well.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on January 31, 2016 at 5:18 PM | link to this | reply

CCT

I'm trying to picture it - you're sitting in the confessional and presenting this to the father confessor...