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Re: Justi

Thank you Justi .

posted by C_C_T on October 30, 2015 at 11:57 AM | link to this | reply

Oh how you can take any jumble of words and weave such a tapestry of beauty. I love this and could just watch it in my mind. Be blessed friend.

posted by Justi on October 29, 2015 at 1:39 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

Stop grinning.

posted by C_C_T on October 29, 2015 at 12:40 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Annicita

No A. one told me as he went to open a gate a Black Panther jumped over and one sees swarms of rats on the move at times.

posted by C_C_T on October 29, 2015 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Wiley

Yes some are still walking the night delivering milk Bro a dying project it is so much cheaper in the stores. 

posted by C_C_T on October 29, 2015 at 12:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Re: Kabu

posted by Kabu on October 28, 2015 at 5:41 PM | link to this | reply

this is cream of the crop sir.

posted by BC-A on October 28, 2015 at 3:51 PM | link to this | reply

I don't think I would want the life of a milkman

posted by Annicita on October 28, 2015 at 2:28 PM | link to this | reply

ChiffChaff

Countryside dreariness written into the colour of living life Bro.

posted by WileyJohn on October 28, 2015 at 11:31 AM | link to this | reply

Re: The hard season approaches... standards shift...

I see you are using eye technology Ciel. I have moved out of the shed one lady did not hack it.  

posted by C_C_T on October 28, 2015 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Yes thanks Naut , I do like criticism . It was a bit soggy at the end .

posted by C_C_T on October 28, 2015 at 11:22 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Taps

Worked outside a lot on the dark Taps I must have remembered.

posted by C_C_T on October 28, 2015 at 11:20 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Awesome imagery, C C T!

Made it more gentle for our Kabu, Kat. Thanks.

posted by C_C_T on October 28, 2015 at 11:19 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FS

Thanks FS

posted by C_C_T on October 28, 2015 at 11:18 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Yes alright I have changed it for you, for you ,for you.

posted by C_C_T on October 28, 2015 at 11:17 AM | link to this | reply

I like how the stanzas flow and how they are in different sizes. A fine job as always.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on October 28, 2015 at 6:24 AM | link to this | reply

Awesome imagery, C C T!

creatures, some out of the mix, divorce, comfort of self as opposed to togetherness with the wrong birdie, I think I get it - or not...:) Great work!

posted by Katray2 on October 28, 2015 at 1:48 AM | link to this | reply

Wow!  You really have a good imagination, or wonderful powers of observation.

posted by TAPS. on October 27, 2015 at 11:31 PM | link to this | reply

CCT

You masterfully dredge fascination out of dreariness - this is really very well done...

posted by Nautikos on October 27, 2015 at 4:44 PM | link to this | reply

The hard season approaches... standards shift...

When living in a tin shed, the world is seen through bleak filters.

 

posted by Ciel on October 27, 2015 at 3:48 PM | link to this | reply

It is a great description of a soggy wet cold evening.

Not sure how the last line fits...

posted by Kabu on October 27, 2015 at 2:44 PM | link to this | reply