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Re: Justi
Thank you Justi . 
posted by
C_C_T
on October 30, 2015 at 11:57 AM
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Oh how you can take any jumble of words and weave such a tapestry of beauty. I love this and could just watch it in my mind. Be blessed friend.
posted by
Justi
on October 29, 2015 at 1:39 PM
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Kabu
Stop grinning.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 29, 2015 at 12:40 PM
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Re: Annicita
No A. one told me as he went to open a gate a Black Panther jumped over and one sees swarms of rats on the move at times.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 29, 2015 at 12:39 PM
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Re: Wiley
Yes some are still walking the night delivering milk Bro a dying project it is so much cheaper in the stores.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 29, 2015 at 12:37 PM
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Re: Re: Kabu

posted by
Kabu
on October 28, 2015 at 5:41 PM
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this is cream of the crop sir.
posted by
BC-A
on October 28, 2015 at 3:51 PM
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I don't think I would want the life of a milkman
posted by
Annicita
on October 28, 2015 at 2:28 PM
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ChiffChaff
Countryside dreariness written into the colour of living life Bro.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 28, 2015 at 11:31 AM
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Re: The hard season approaches... standards shift...
I see you are using eye technology Ciel. I have moved out of the shed one lady did not hack it. 
posted by
C_C_T
on October 28, 2015 at 11:25 AM
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Re: CCT
Yes thanks Naut , I do like criticism . It was a bit soggy at the end .

posted by
C_C_T
on October 28, 2015 at 11:22 AM
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Re: Taps
Worked outside a lot on the dark Taps I must have remembered.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 28, 2015 at 11:20 AM
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Re: Awesome imagery, C C T!
Made it more gentle for our Kabu, Kat. Thanks.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 28, 2015 at 11:19 AM
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Re: FS
Thanks FS
posted by
C_C_T
on October 28, 2015 at 11:18 AM
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Re: Kabu
Yes alright I have changed it for you, for you ,for you.
posted by
C_C_T
on October 28, 2015 at 11:17 AM
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I like how the stanzas flow and how they are in different sizes. A fine job as always.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 28, 2015 at 6:24 AM
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Awesome imagery, C C T!
creatures, some out of the mix, divorce, comfort of self as opposed to togetherness with the wrong birdie, I think I get it - or not...:) Great work! 

posted by
Katray2
on October 28, 2015 at 1:48 AM
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Wow! You really have a good imagination, or wonderful powers of observation.
posted by
TAPS.
on October 27, 2015 at 11:31 PM
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CCT
You masterfully dredge fascination out of dreariness - this is really very well done...

posted by
Nautikos
on October 27, 2015 at 4:44 PM
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The hard season approaches... standards shift...
When living in a tin shed, the world is seen through bleak filters.

posted by
Ciel
on October 27, 2015 at 3:48 PM
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It is a great description of a soggy wet cold evening.
Not sure how the last line fits...
posted by
Kabu
on October 27, 2015 at 2:44 PM
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