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Re: Feels like a writing exercise that I think
Thank you for spotting that Kat, I have kept the lower case but deleted the capital.
It is a grotty little poem so I shall not save it.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 17, 2015 at 9:35 AM
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Feels like a writing exercise that I think
you did quite well on..(or with?...
) The countdown added to the "test" appeal. One thing - to should be too? - (first sentence, if memory serves.) Well okay, my edit hint.
posted by
Katray2
on September 17, 2015 at 9:18 AM
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Re:kasperhoe.
Well K. it takes a lot on nerve to criticize anything on Blogit. You may not even have seen it but one member did start to criticize poems, he did go a bit over the top, I mean there is a nice way, not that I know what that is. Or there is sudden death when one calls something rubbish. If that happens the gentle Blogit folk rise like an angry swarm of bees and sting to death. So I just thought a thumbs down would be gentle and honest.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 17, 2015 at 6:25 AM
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Re:
Simple style Chuck.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 17, 2015 at 6:12 AM
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Re: FS
No just fooling around FS.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 17, 2015 at 6:11 AM
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I like the usage of time in your poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 17, 2015 at 5:33 AM
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Nice poem 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 16, 2015 at 4:44 PM
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I dare you to....
I dare you to edit this one... Haha.
No, I was just kidding. Actually, I like your little concept here. But about this "I dare you to..."-thing: Did you dare to edit it?
Not that I really think it would be necessary.
posted by
kasperhoe
on September 16, 2015 at 12:55 PM
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