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Re: Re:
I'll leave that for someone else to do.
Your are an artist at what you do, and in your own way. 
posted by
TAPS.
on September 16, 2015 at 9:51 AM
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Re: Chuck
It does that sometimes Chuck, but not if one is left a fortune.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2015 at 9:44 AM
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Re: ChiffChaff
Yes I know Bro it is a bit audacious to write things that some cannot understand, I will try and be more coherant if I can find a nice new Muse or even an old one to smack me around the head.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2015 at 9:43 AM
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I am good at miming Kabu I must have the sweetest voice around. Yes I rely on you to be truthful.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2015 at 9:40 AM
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Re: CCT
Ok Naut, I hope you will tell me if one is not up to it, these are all old poems, so I don't really mind.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2015 at 9:38 AM
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Yes but you have to be cruel to be kind sometimes Taps, i know some go berserk if anyone criticizes their poems. The point is sometimes one writes things that are mediocre and then it is better to just knock that on the head.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2015 at 9:36 AM
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Re: F.S
Thank you FS.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2015 at 9:32 AM
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Re: Bill
Well Bill my cousin told me that he went to a Church service at Christmas Eve, He was the only one there beside the rector.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 16, 2015 at 9:31 AM
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In my old church he was the one man choir sir.
posted by
BC-A
on September 16, 2015 at 6:41 AM
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Your poem does a great job of making the reader think.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 16, 2015 at 5:30 AM
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I can't imagine me giving you a 
for any reason at all.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 15, 2015 at 9:07 PM
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CCT
This has some very powerful moments - the whole thing speaks of a kind of resigned despair at the inevitably trivial responses to encountering death...Do not toss this out!!!
posted by
Nautikos
on September 15, 2015 at 8:02 PM
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If one is tone deaf it is a almost a duty to sing loud to the maker who let it happen.
posted by
Kabu
on September 15, 2015 at 5:41 PM
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ChiffChaff
I am not a poet critique, I'm a retired mechanic. Look I find a lot of poetry difficult to understand as it is, and I just comment because it is the friendly thing to do but I really am at the " Mary had a little lamb........." stage and no use to being looked upon as a critic Bro
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 15, 2015 at 4:18 PM
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Once they are gone they are gone. It takes one week of mourning then life moves on.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 15, 2015 at 3:09 PM
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