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Beautifully written...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 25, 2014 at 7:14 PM
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Is this going to be a regular book or an ebook?
I hope it is the previous.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 25, 2014 at 6:49 PM
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Kabu
Aye that's a warm folksy story you have there love. BC-A, Bill's R:):)st
posted by
BC-A
on January 25, 2014 at 1:14 PM
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It's wonderful to get the history woven into the character as
you've done. It's all organic and woven together - if I didn't know how much effort goes into such work I'd think it all just dropped from your fingers this way. Loving this!!!
posted by
Pat_B
on January 25, 2014 at 3:38 AM
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You must tell us about dirty old Tom as well. Perhaps Mary's kin could put a curse on him. Turn him into a wolf or some thing. Interesting background. Hard work writing stories though.A lot of research needed, but you know a lot of things passed down from the old folks and that is good news. Good luck, you won't feel like doing it when the first Spring flower appears.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 25, 2014 at 12:47 AM
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This will be a seller. It is excellent. Let me know when and where.
posted by
Justi
on January 24, 2014 at 9:26 PM
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Kabuiepie-;)~
I have spent two days reading and editing 'Tom' and as I have said to you many tmes, you have the real story 'juice'. Now get it published love.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 24, 2014 at 5:43 PM
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What an amazing sight with all of those animals.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 24, 2014 at 3:24 PM
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I just love the aboriginal idea of "dream time when Mother Earth was born" it reminds me so very much of the American Indians and their stories about creation. This is an enjoyable read indeed.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 24, 2014 at 2:17 PM
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