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Whew! A powerful scene, very well written...
posted by
Nautikos
on January 23, 2014 at 6:20 PM
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You write it so well. It does make one get caught up into it no matter what part of the book you post exerpts from. Keep'm coming.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 23, 2014 at 12:50 PM
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tom is kinda mean, ain't he?
posted by
Carolyn_Moe
on January 23, 2014 at 11:54 AM
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Oh dear one this is so good. You are doing a very good job. He is rat bait.
posted by
Justi
on January 23, 2014 at 11:44 AM
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I have known men like this and your discription is right on.
posted by
UtahJay
on January 23, 2014 at 11:02 AM
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how sad it was for women like Mary
posted by
Lanetay
on January 23, 2014 at 7:26 AM
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yeah, i ain't running no abo. camp neither! your aussieness makes for an interesting point of view.
posted by
Carolyn_Moe
on January 23, 2014 at 5:50 AM
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Wow! I just want to take old Tom and do what CCT said...
Wonderful characterization of a sub-human brute!
posted by
Pat_B
on January 23, 2014 at 5:11 AM
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Well now we don't mind what happens to dirty old Tom he could fall down a dry well and Mary could pour boiling hot water over him, or gradually fill the well with manure. Quite exciting in a way.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2014 at 12:15 AM
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Kabuiepie-;)~
That was a good write, prooves that all writing isn't pleasant and happy, full of compassion. You're a great writer darlin' but I've gone soft in my old age, the characters bad and good are so recognizingly described, I got to hate the man and love the lass and her baby.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 22, 2014 at 9:19 PM
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A tense scene you have there.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 22, 2014 at 6:17 PM
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But still well done.
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on January 22, 2014 at 6:03 PM
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