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Superior...
Where did you say I could find your book...
lavoro bello, cara signora...
-Ted
posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on March 4, 2005 at 7:09 AM
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Thanks Original!
This is an oldie but a goodie! I wrote it before my accident...can you see how different my writing style is? I like it a lot, too. Thanks for reading an older post. :)
posted by
Temple
on February 15, 2005 at 3:03 PM
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Hi Temple!
This is a very good poem...I like it a lot!
posted by
Original_Influence
on February 15, 2005 at 4:18 AM
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Thanks for reading and commenting, Tanoolicious.
I'm glad you liked it. :)
posted by
Temple
on July 8, 2004 at 6:13 PM
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lovely poem!
posted by
Tanoolicious
on July 8, 2004 at 3:10 PM
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Thanks, Sue....an oldie but a goodie here
It feels happy to be read after so long! :)
posted by
Temple
on June 11, 2004 at 7:47 PM
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very beautiful ........rhythm dances with it
posted by
Star5_
on June 11, 2004 at 7:40 PM
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Softy, Lynnie and PS
Wow, I'm lagging on comments over here. I was new :) I'm so glad you liked it, it's one of my favorites, too.
Deep, indeed. Maybe I need to be tossed in shallow water from time to time! Sometimes to know and see is devestating. I often wish for a minute of ignorance where I can relax.
posted by
Temple
on April 12, 2004 at 4:53 PM
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very deep
loved it!! Hugs ~ Softy
posted by
MySoftHeart
on April 12, 2004 at 4:36 PM
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Good poem, good image to show how painful it can be to Know and to See, great last line. Keep on writing! Blessings.
posted by
Lynnie
on March 16, 2004 at 7:38 AM
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That was nice
posted by
SuccessWarrior
on January 9, 2004 at 3:11 PM
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CL
Thank you!
posted by
Temple
on January 7, 2004 at 4:37 PM
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Very Nice
stick around, I think you have something to say.
posted by
CunningLinguist
on January 7, 2004 at 3:59 PM
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