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Superior...
Where did you say I could find your book...lavoro bello, cara signora...   -Ted

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on March 4, 2005 at 7:09 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks Original!
This is an oldie but a goodie!  I wrote it before my accident...can you see how different my writing style is?  I like it a lot, too.  Thanks for reading an older post. :)

posted by Temple on February 15, 2005 at 3:03 PM | link to this | reply

Hi Temple!
This is a very good poem...I like it a lot!

posted by Original_Influence on February 15, 2005 at 4:18 AM | link to this | reply

Thanks for reading and commenting, Tanoolicious.
I'm glad you liked it.  :)

posted by Temple on July 8, 2004 at 6:13 PM | link to this | reply

lovely poem!

posted by Tanoolicious on July 8, 2004 at 3:10 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Sue....an oldie but a goodie here

It feels happy to be read after so long! :)

posted by Temple on June 11, 2004 at 7:47 PM | link to this | reply

very beautiful ........rhythm dances with it

posted by Star5_ on June 11, 2004 at 7:40 PM | link to this | reply

Softy, Lynnie and PS

Wow, I'm lagging on comments over here.  I was new :)  I'm so glad you liked it, it's one of my favorites, too. 

Deep, indeed.  Maybe I need to be tossed in shallow water from time to time!  Sometimes to know and see is devestating.  I often wish for a minute of ignorance where I can relax.

posted by Temple on April 12, 2004 at 4:53 PM | link to this | reply

very deep
loved it!! Hugs ~ Softy

posted by MySoftHeart on April 12, 2004 at 4:36 PM | link to this | reply

Good poem, good image to show how painful it can be to Know and to See, great last line. Keep on writing! Blessings.

posted by Lynnie on March 16, 2004 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

That was nice

posted by SuccessWarrior on January 9, 2004 at 3:11 PM | link to this | reply

CL
Thank you!

posted by Temple on January 7, 2004 at 4:37 PM | link to this | reply

Very Nice

stick around, I think you have something to say.

posted by CunningLinguist on January 7, 2004 at 3:59 PM | link to this | reply