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CCT...thank you...
Yeah, I thought of a bone for the doggie, but I was afraid it might not be to his liking and he'd go for my head instead...maybe he'll be back in another story....
posted by
Rumor
on September 4, 2013 at 12:50 PM
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Pretty tough one to write Rumour, but you seem to manipulate the nasties exceedingly
well. I suppose you could have offered the hound a bone, better to keep in with that kind of doggie.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 4, 2013 at 11:02 AM
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adnohr...
Well, ya never know..someone may have been hungry after that battle scene....
posted by
Rumor
on September 3, 2013 at 8:07 AM
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adnohr..I'm glad the battle scene came through so vividly...
And you're right, there may be more to come....
posted by
Rumor
on September 3, 2013 at 8:05 AM
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TAPS...
Me, too...there's such an air of mystery about the sound....
posted by
Rumor
on September 3, 2013 at 8:03 AM
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LOL - that is good stuff - typo for the food.
posted by
adnohr
on September 3, 2013 at 12:54 AM
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And it ends with a hint of more to come. Food stuff - I could picture that battle in my head as I was reading.
posted by
adnohr
on September 3, 2013 at 12:53 AM
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I love the sound of a baying hound.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 2, 2013 at 3:56 PM
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Annicita..thanks very much...
I'm glad the suspense held together all the way through..it would be an interesting challenge to come up with some similar stories - mysteries with hints of the supernatural along the way...
posted by
Rumor
on September 1, 2013 at 1:12 PM
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Kabu..thanks very much...
I was thinking the same thing - a series of "Detective Stories" with hints of the supernatural along the way....
posted by
Rumor
on September 1, 2013 at 1:07 PM
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FSI..thanks..
This cast of characters could make a series of "Detective Stories" work (I think)...writing it in the 1st person was an interesting change, too....
posted by
Rumor
on September 1, 2013 at 1:04 PM
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kept me in suspense to the end....great job!
posted by
Annicita
on September 1, 2013 at 12:56 PM
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Thank you for a great story and for coming back and finishing it. Loved the battle scene and i think that this would make a great telly series.
posted by
Kabu
on September 1, 2013 at 12:15 PM
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You had me on the edge of my seat as I read the ending...A lot of interesting characters here.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 1, 2013 at 9:25 AM
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Pat...thank you..glad you enjoyed it...
And I apologize for not dropping someone an email letting everyone know I was okay...I could have used either daughter's computer... - hit in the head for Rumor..
posted by
Rumor
on September 1, 2013 at 7:54 AM
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The story's excellent fun - the battle scene well drawn...
But even more, I'm so happy to read you here again. I've been a bit worried about your absence. I hope you'll run this one again for Halloween!
posted by
Pat_B
on September 1, 2013 at 7:40 AM
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