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Thanks, Kabu...
The tension is there...all I need to do now is maintain it..
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posted by
Rumor
on July 31, 2013 at 5:48 PM
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Pat...
Sounds to grab and keep a reader's attention, I hope..
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posted by
Rumor
on July 31, 2013 at 5:44 PM
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CCT...
I patterned "Patricia" in the story after Liz, so I'm certain I was well fed.
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posted by
Rumor
on July 31, 2013 at 5:41 PM
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Saif...thank you...
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posted by
Rumor
on July 31, 2013 at 5:38 PM
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FSI...
That's good to know..and the cliffhanger helped a lot....
posted by
Rumor
on July 31, 2013 at 5:38 PM
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everything about this start has me excited to read more of this story.
posted by
Kabu
on July 31, 2013 at 2:27 PM
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A foggy night, sounds echoing across the cobblestones...
and the title "The Hearse." 
posted by
Pat_B
on July 31, 2013 at 12:25 PM
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Creepy was it near a park, I hope you had a nice hot meat pie for supper,.
posted by
C_C_T
on July 31, 2013 at 11:41 AM
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Nice beginning..
posted by
Saif_AlKindi
on July 31, 2013 at 10:48 AM
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This has quite the haunting beginning.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on July 31, 2013 at 10:43 AM
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