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lionreign...
Thank you very kindly.
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posted by
Rumor
on May 23, 2013 at 8:18 AM
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Eloquently done, the images were brilliant
posted by
lionreign
on May 23, 2013 at 3:54 AM
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Jimmy..hmmm..good point...
Dampness set into the place deeply with a fresh dust covering daily? Lol..."poet's license"..
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posted by
Rumor
on May 21, 2013 at 2:23 PM
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A nice, serene setting is in place here, but I do have one, minor nit-pick . . . is it possible for a floor to be dusty and damp? 
posted by
JimmyA
on May 21, 2013 at 1:59 PM
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Jay...welcome back..:)
I've missed your writings...My subscription expires June 2nd, but I'm pretty sure I'll renew with either one or three blogs.
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posted by
Rumor
on May 21, 2013 at 11:29 AM
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CCT..yes, I agree...
I think the old mouse better find a newer house to scrounge around in..
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posted by
Rumor
on May 21, 2013 at 11:26 AM
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I have been out of the loop for awhile, but it is good to come back to poetry like this.
posted by
UtahJay
on May 21, 2013 at 10:44 AM
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poor little mouse time to move to a better scene, I shouldn't think it could run up the clock.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 21, 2013 at 8:51 AM
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Bill...
Hmm, that wouldn't be too good for the poor little mouse..
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posted by
Rumor
on May 21, 2013 at 8:38 AM
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Kabu...
One can hear his little footsteps in that big old house...one can even hear him sniffing the breadcrumbs at times..
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posted by
Rumor
on May 21, 2013 at 8:37 AM
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Rumor
ÝThe mouse could mistake a mousetrap for a clock sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st
posted by
BC-A
on May 20, 2013 at 7:14 PM
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Poor little mouse in the big old house...Tick Tock
posted by
Kabu
on May 20, 2013 at 5:01 PM
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Annicita...
I thought of "Hickory Dickory Dock", too, as I was writing this.
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posted by
Rumor
on May 20, 2013 at 3:00 PM
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Thanks, Pat....
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posted by
Rumor
on May 20, 2013 at 2:58 PM
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FSI...
Yes, the clock would have many tales to tell, and the mouse would no doubt have a few, too..
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posted by
Rumor
on May 20, 2013 at 2:57 PM
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reminds me of hickory dickory dock with a happier ending
posted by
Annicita
on May 20, 2013 at 2:49 PM
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I like the images in this one.
posted by
Pat_B
on May 20, 2013 at 1:16 PM
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The stories the clock could tell...
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 20, 2013 at 10:48 AM
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