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lionreign...

Thank you very kindly...

posted by Rumor on May 23, 2013 at 8:18 AM | link to this | reply

Eloquently done, the images were brilliant

posted by lionreign on May 23, 2013 at 3:54 AM | link to this | reply

Jimmy..hmmm..good point...

Dampness set into the place deeply with a fresh dust covering daily? Lol..."poet's license"....

posted by Rumor on May 21, 2013 at 2:23 PM | link to this | reply

A nice, serene setting is in place here, but I do have one, minor nit-pick . . . is it possible for a floor to be dusty and damp? 

posted by JimmyA on May 21, 2013 at 1:59 PM | link to this | reply

Jay...welcome back..:)

I've missed your writings...My subscription expires June 2nd, but I'm pretty sure I'll renew with either one or three blogs...

posted by Rumor on May 21, 2013 at 11:29 AM | link to this | reply

CCT..yes, I agree...

I think the old mouse better find a newer house to scrounge around in....

posted by Rumor on May 21, 2013 at 11:26 AM | link to this | reply

I have been out of the loop for awhile, but it is good to come back to poetry like this.

posted by UtahJay on May 21, 2013 at 10:44 AM | link to this | reply

poor little mouse time to move to a better scene, I shouldn't think it could run up the clock.

posted by C_C_T on May 21, 2013 at 8:51 AM | link to this | reply

Bill...

Hmm, that wouldn't be too good for the poor little mouse.....

posted by Rumor on May 21, 2013 at 8:38 AM | link to this | reply

Kabu...

One can hear his little footsteps in that big old house...one can even hear him sniffing the breadcrumbs at times....

posted by Rumor on May 21, 2013 at 8:37 AM | link to this | reply

Rumor

ÝThe mouse could mistake a mousetrap for a clock sir. BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on May 20, 2013 at 7:14 PM | link to this | reply

Poor little mouse in the big old house...Tick Tock

posted by Kabu on May 20, 2013 at 5:01 PM | link to this | reply

Annicita...

I thought of "Hickory Dickory Dock", too, as I was writing this....

posted by Rumor on May 20, 2013 at 3:00 PM | link to this | reply

Thanks, Pat....

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posted by Rumor on May 20, 2013 at 2:58 PM | link to this | reply

FSI...

Yes, the clock would have many tales to tell, and the mouse would no doubt have a few, too....

posted by Rumor on May 20, 2013 at 2:57 PM | link to this | reply

reminds me of hickory dickory dock with a happier ending

posted by Annicita on May 20, 2013 at 2:49 PM | link to this | reply

I like the images in this one.

posted by Pat_B on May 20, 2013 at 1:16 PM | link to this | reply

The stories the clock could tell...

posted by FormerStudentIntern on May 20, 2013 at 10:48 AM | link to this | reply