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Re: Re: Kabu

CC you are priceless.

posted by Kabu on April 14, 2013 at 1:18 PM | link to this | reply

cc

i went back and read and reread and may have to read again to see the rudeness.

but i have to admit that i do see something different now, maybe it is just a different day for me.

and sometimes i am afraid to admit to what i think i have read, afraid of being wrong and perhaps afraid of being right, so i see what i want to see. so i see three different things here, the wrong, the right and what i want to see.  that makes your poem pretty good.

 

posted by jeansaw on April 14, 2013 at 1:01 PM | link to this | reply

I like the phrase 'threadbare chest' - nicely descriptive. Is this what I have to look forward to as my partner ages? Very sweet..

posted by mneme on April 14, 2013 at 11:42 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Justi

Hello Justi, yes I have begun to realise my ambitions might be steroid related. I suppose like you I have always been used to work and after all it is a bit of fun sometimes 

posted by C_C_T on April 14, 2013 at 7:56 AM | link to this | reply

Re: FS

It was a killer FS I try not to get near to those electric organs. I shall know next time, not too soon though I hope

posted by C_C_T on April 14, 2013 at 7:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re:jeansaw

The poem was rather rude JS but not many liked to say so. Beauty is in the mind so they say..

posted by C_C_T on April 14, 2013 at 7:50 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Kabu

Yes like have I been left anything in the will. . Just thinking what you might be thinking. Thank you Kabu only jokimg.

posted by C_C_T on April 14, 2013 at 7:46 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Well Naut I did sympathise with the deceased when he was poorly and I think it is better to be helpful when one can make use of it. Actually I wish I had replaced my hearing aid and listened to the dirge.

posted by C_C_T on April 14, 2013 at 7:43 AM | link to this | reply

Re: CCT

Yes Bill better only to go if the star performer is dead.

posted by C_C_T on April 14, 2013 at 7:39 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you Taps I wanted to go to wee. Probably funeral nerves.

posted by C_C_T on April 14, 2013 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

Not many can write interestingly about a funeral.
I think perhaps you can write about anything, and make it very readable.

posted by TAPS. on April 14, 2013 at 12:27 AM | link to this | reply

CCT

YI skipped, going to some funerals sir.   BC-A, Bill’s R®st

posted by BC-A on April 13, 2013 at 6:47 PM | link to this | reply

CCT

The funeral story is a total hoot - I think this is the first time I would have laughed at a funeral had I been there, LOL...And your poem is very interesting...

posted by Nautikos on April 13, 2013 at 6:19 PM | link to this | reply

i usually think about something that interests me during sermon

most are pretty well boring actually. Sorry your neighbour died...

posted by Kabu on April 13, 2013 at 5:22 PM | link to this | reply

cc

 thought is if you've heard one sermon at a funeral, then you have heard them all. at least you can think about your garden and how your family, friends and neighbors will benefit.

i really didnt understand the poem until the last three lines, which i liked very much. but then i never did understand being a miser.

posted by jeansaw on April 13, 2013 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

I cannot imagine how bad the noise must have felt...I love how you leave us there at the end of the poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 13, 2013 at 12:40 PM | link to this | reply

C.C.

I am sorry about the hearing aid situation. I do not like funerals. Don't overdo it in that garden this year. Sounds like you are expanding. I do hope you have a nice weekend.

posted by Justi on April 13, 2013 at 11:34 AM | link to this | reply