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Wow! What a story, and with a lucky ending indeed! Aside from the knee, of course, but it could have been infinitely worse...
posted by
Nautikos
on March 25, 2013 at 4:49 PM
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A lovely story, Grandmummy.
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on March 25, 2013 at 1:46 PM
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What a great story and it ended so well, after all the bad stuff! You found the good or should I say you wrote the "good" in it? 
posted by
Butterfly-1950
on March 25, 2013 at 1:28 PM
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That's true. And like my wife always says "Things happen for a reason!" 
posted by
JimmyA
on March 25, 2013 at 7:50 AM
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interesting story, glad everyone was ok for years to come
posted by
Lanetay
on March 25, 2013 at 7:45 AM
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Kabu
PPancakes are always happy endings love. BC-A, Bill’s R®stö
posted by
BC-A
on March 25, 2013 at 6:28 AM
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that story is lovely - well done
posted by
lionreign
on March 25, 2013 at 4:27 AM
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I think you are really good at entertaining WileyJohn (and the rest of us who tune in).
posted by
TAPS.
on March 24, 2013 at 11:54 PM
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Kabuiepie-;)~
Wowie, you are just masterful at everything love. I've got lots of prompts that's what I do best writing 1 sentence. LOL Now you've turned it into entertainment with the ease of a pro, I love you. By golly thanks for putting the Treadmill together today too, I just love you for everything you do Superwife.
posted by
WileyJohn
on March 24, 2013 at 8:06 PM
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You are a fine storyteller and so suspensful(is that a word, I have a subdued migraine) . I liked that and wanted to hear a happy ending!! I have wanted to suggest considering compiling a short book of some of your stories for Amazon sales, maybe testing with the no cost or low cost publishing. Great story.
posted by
mariss9
on March 24, 2013 at 7:33 PM
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I was glued to every word! I had wondered if something had happened to her but I did not imagine his misdeed would end up saving a life! Great work with the writing prompt, too! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 24, 2013 at 6:04 PM
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A lot of excitement there is when one gets behind the wheel. The boy is quite the character.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on March 24, 2013 at 5:34 PM
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I had to laugh at the prompt...
Just today I told someone about a T-shirt one of the girls gave Charlie: Some mornings it's just not worth chewing through the straps.
I like how you tell a tale: very economic use of words, saying enough for the reader to put together everything, but you don't give every detail.
posted by
Ciel
on March 24, 2013 at 3:44 PM
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Excellent story to come out of a few words! Kudos, sweet Kabu!!
posted by
adnohr
on March 24, 2013 at 3:09 PM
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Wow. He knew a bit about driving...
guess it's true, a little knowledge is a dangerous thing. I'm thinking the dad who's spending an hour at the office on Sunday was not spending the time alone, but that's my soap opera suspicious mind at work.
posted by
Pat_B
on March 24, 2013 at 2:48 PM
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