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Hi Annicita, thank you for the comment. I don't want to get into too many flashbacks, as it wouldn't follow the future of the story line, but I appreciate the advice and it is appropriate in some places which I will keep in mind while writing. 
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RamfamilyWritings
on November 16, 2012 at 12:12 PM
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Hmm, I don't know about that CCT, too much sex...
I guess if one is just all over the place, landing in different ports...so to speak
...But I believe statistics say that an active sex life, be it with self or a partner(LTR) actually prolongs ones life span. So no disrespect to dear ol' grampy(which is what we used to call my grandfather too, btw) but maybe he was just too active with too many of the wrong type, or maybe not, I don't know. It's interesting though that you should comment on the sexual aspect of the story in a chapter that has no sex in it....maybe the sexual parts have stayed on your mind...? I would take that as a compliment since it would mean that the story has captured you, which is what a good book is supposed to do, I would think. 
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RamfamilyWritings
on November 16, 2012 at 12:09 PM
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Perhaps over sexual stimulant is tiring. My grampy used to say too much humpty dumpy will put you in the boneyard early. Mind it did not stop him from trying according to his sister, but that is another story.
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C_C_T
on November 15, 2012 at 11:19 PM
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ooooooooooo....i remember days like that with my ex...so that is a good start to her backstory....keep up the good work....might want to interlace stories of her having flashbacks of the abuse with her ex during her sessions on cam....
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Annicita
on November 15, 2012 at 7:38 PM
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