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Thank you for the visit comment Chuck. I hope you're enjoying the story. 
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on November 14, 2012 at 8:47 AM
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Oh, no CCT!!! PLEASE, don't stop criticizing. I really meant it when I said I appreciate the criticizm. So if you see anything that would improve my writing, please let me know. I did take some of the slang for body parts out for you, btw...
Thank you for the read and comment CCT.
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RamfamilyWritings
on November 14, 2012 at 8:46 AM
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Interesting adult mature story 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on November 13, 2012 at 11:41 PM
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Well thinking about it from a realistic point if I were a woman and as desperate, I would much prefer this action to prostitution. Or other bewildering acts which are really depraved.So I will criticize no longer and thank you for being gracious. 
posted by
C_C_T
on November 13, 2012 at 10:53 PM
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I am eager to see how Crystal will broach the subject with Jody eventually,
or won't she?
posted by
Straightforward
on November 13, 2012 at 5:57 PM
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