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I use to write erotica and everyone ganged up on me and made me move it to Mature department.  I am surprised they havent done that to you  But good writing.

posted by Lanetay on November 14, 2012 at 8:30 AM | link to this | reply

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Lol, hey CCT, it's gotten a few views. It'll be interesting to see how it does. I know it's a gamble, but what the hell, the worse that can happen is that it gets 0 views, and at best it may liven things up around here. Either way it works for me....

Thanks for the visit and comment. Have a wonderful holiday.

posted by RamfamilyWritings on November 11, 2012 at 10:33 PM | link to this | reply

interesting, I wonder how many views this is getting, that is what counts.

posted by C_C_T on November 11, 2012 at 10:08 PM | link to this | reply

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Hey Contagion, thanks for the read. I'm glad your enjoying the story so far. I always find your work interesting, straight forward, with no cut. Keep up the good work. 

posted by RamfamilyWritings on November 11, 2012 at 7:01 PM | link to this | reply

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Great advice Annicita, thank you and I'll give it some thought. Yeah, I can see where you would think "pussy" is out of character for Crystal, but I think I was trying to give the reader that she isn't really as innocent or pure as she may seem to be. Thank you for the great feedback. I always appreciate your comments. 

posted by RamfamilyWritings on November 11, 2012 at 6:59 PM | link to this | reply

well.....i think it is out of character for her to use the word pussy...i always hated that word and i think women who respect themselves don't use it.  there is a lot of expository writing so you are telling instead of showing....might want to use flashbacks while she is on the net to times with her ex...

great writing

posted by Annicita on November 11, 2012 at 5:54 PM | link to this | reply

Thank you

for reading my posts each time & I'm enjoying reading yours. Yes, there's no fabricated B.S. in my writing. Everytrhing comes from the heart & it's real.

posted by contagion_publishing on November 11, 2012 at 2:14 PM | link to this | reply