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Thank you Annicita for the comment and your opinions are always important to me, I appreciate all of your input and insight. Thank you for your continued support. 
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RamfamilyWritings
on November 11, 2012 at 10:37 AM
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Lmao CCT, I don't know, I tend to find good sex not just pretty, but beautiful. Two bodies intertwined in an intimate act, working together like a perfect machine, and to add emotion to that making it love, is a wonderful thing, in my opinion. Lol, I think Eve was naive and didn't "think" about it much at all, in my mind it was purely animalistic instinct to reproduce, and a perk was that it was also enjoyable. At least I hope she found it enjoyable. 
Thank you for the read and comment CCT.
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RamfamilyWritings
on November 11, 2012 at 10:35 AM
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Well, it would be to me LL, but I was kinda trying to take the oldest profession in the world and combine it with modern technologiy of the day. I had heard about all those prostiution stings on Craigslist and this is what I came up with. I agree though, it would be embarrassing. 
Thank you for the read and the comment, I'm really surprised I received as many comments as I did, I thought people would find it a bit too much. I'm glad to see people are open minded enough have given it a chance. It gets much better (or worse, depending on how you look at it) as the story goes on though, so it will be interesting to see if the audience sticks with it or shy's away from it.
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RamfamilyWritings
on November 11, 2012 at 10:27 AM
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to me it would be embarrasing doing something so private on the camera
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Lanetay
on November 11, 2012 at 7:20 AM
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Goodness I have never dared type porn into my computer, no one can call sex pretty or call it love, I could have devised a much better method but Eve said 'no, I want lust'.Good writing.
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C_C_T
on November 10, 2012 at 11:31 PM
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well....to me it would be more realistic if she came back to it another day when it popped up again after just receiving a mailbox full of bills she couldn't pay....and i think a woman would be more into saying she wanted sex and missed it...but that's my opinion...good story
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Annicita
on November 10, 2012 at 10:04 PM
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Re: Re: I hear you. I'm eager to see where this is heading - the bottom line is
Thank you 2902 for your comment. I doubt I'll get many readers on this, but it's okay, I write as much for me as I do for the people who read what I write. The story does get interesting though, I hope you keep reading, commenting and enjoying.
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RamfamilyWritings
on November 10, 2012 at 5:52 PM
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Re: I hear you. I'm eager to see where this is heading - the bottom line is
oops, that people in need of money have turned to far more destructive things. Some might say that the long-range effect of contributing to porn is harmful, but that's a bit theoretical. If she loses self-respect as a result, that's something else; but that's not an inevitable result. You're treading strange but interesting ground, true to your internet name.
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2902
on November 10, 2012 at 3:36 PM
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I hear you. I'm eager to see where this is heading - the bottom line is
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2902
on November 10, 2012 at 3:27 PM
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