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Excellent!I could feel the continual struggle, the perseverance, the love - a wonderful and powerful poem. I hope it is true for more than one mother in such circumstance.
posted by
adnohr
on September 29, 2012 at 3:04 PM
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Lovely 
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on September 15, 2012 at 2:01 AM
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mmmmm i always thought the prayer a little ghoulish to be teaching children...interesting twist on it
posted by
Annicita
on September 14, 2012 at 6:00 PM
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Well I don't know many prayers, but it was a cute poem Con
J is very deep into his writing this is self explanatory but sometimes a few words of introduction helps the uninitiated.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 14, 2012 at 10:59 AM
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I like the twist on a well-known prayer...I feel bad for the ghetto mother.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 14, 2012 at 10:49 AM
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