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that is a quite a picture there....i always wonder why the woman is usually unclothed and the man is not!
posted by
Annicita
on September 9, 2012 at 12:44 PM
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Well corn and Isaiah it is very interesting work and one can see that you do a lot of effort into it I have more of a materialistic view and always wonder if a project was marketable
not that I wish to enter that area myself, you are both young and may be in the time will be able to express this kind of poetry to an audience who will appreciate your work. This is a bit muddled as my keyboard is not working.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 9, 2012 at 11:56 AM
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I didn't realize that both poems are in the same entry
Temptation sure does make life interesting.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 9, 2012 at 9:32 AM
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I love the Biblical allusion to Adam and Eve in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 9, 2012 at 9:32 AM
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Re: You certainly don't tread a familiar path, but you're just as certainly
Lmao, hmmm, we like that, 2902! If it's not familiar, that means you're experiencing something new, which is good, right? Also, I did state in my "about me" that we were off the beaten path and that we delve into the dark side of life. We're actually a pretty normal and dull couple (believe it or not, lol) but our imaginations keep things interesting.
My husband is truly much more serious about his writings than I am. His work takes the mind to another realm and many times it may be difficult for the reader to understand the message, but there is always one there, I assure you, and there's always a spiritual moral, despite what the delivery may appear at first glance. Taking the reader out of his/her comfort zone and opening ones senses and mind to another dimension of reality is what we aim for, he is much better at it than I am though. My work is more straight forward and "in your face" (so I've been told). Our styles are very different and change from time to time, but we hope to always keep our readers interested and possibly even learn something from what we write. My husbands writings are full of more research and knowledge, while mine are mainly emotion and what I see in the moment.
We hope this gives some insight into us and we're happy that you're enjoying what we write despite our unconventionalism. Thank you for your time and support 2902. 
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on September 8, 2012 at 4:50 PM
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You certainly don't tread a familiar path, but you're just as certainly
not dull!
posted by
2902
on September 8, 2012 at 1:34 PM
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