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Re: Natural Effect
Hey, CCT
"Out of the tunnel?" I suppose your right. And my views on the world are pretty absrtract anyway. Thanks for your feedback. Love the star.
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RamfamilyWritings
on August 26, 2012 at 11:53 AM
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Re: Natural Effect
Thanks for your comments, Utah. Stay tunned for the next installment of this one.
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 26, 2012 at 11:48 AM
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Hi FSI,
Thanks for commenting on the Natural Effect. I'm a deep thinker and this brewed in my head for a few hours before coming out. Funny you should mention the level of intensity: I am full of intense energy in this moment. 
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RamfamilyWritings
on August 26, 2012 at 11:46 AM
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An incredible level of intensity that the speaker feels in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 26, 2012 at 9:37 AM
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I agree with CCT, with age comes wisdom, with wisdom comes kindness, with kindness comes love, with love comes acceptance.
posted by
UtahJay
on August 26, 2012 at 7:05 AM
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I guess it is your way out of the tunnel one day you will just smash it down and find the world.
posted by
C_C_T
on August 25, 2012 at 11:23 PM
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