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Thanks CCT, I'm glad I have too and my kids are great, so all in all I'm blessed. Like they say, what doesn't kill you makes you stronger. 

posted by RamfamilyWritings on August 25, 2012 at 9:02 AM | link to this | reply

Such a sad poem Con no wonder that many of your poems are disturbing. I am glad you have found a good husband. And I hope you can release the Genie from the bottle. 

posted by C_C_T on August 24, 2012 at 11:29 PM | link to this | reply

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Don't we though Annicita...? It's a shame that some of those masks are or have been needed for survival. Thank you for your visit, comment, and isight. I feel we may have somethings in common......I could be wrong, of course, but you have an insight only someone who has survived could understand. Thank you my keyboard friend.  I think you'll appreciate the one I post tomorrow morning. 

posted by RamfamilyWritings on August 24, 2012 at 1:04 PM | link to this | reply

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Lol, yeah, I don't miss the old days so much FS. I explained a bit in my response to 2902. Wasn't much fun for me back then, but I'm still here to tell the story. 

posted by RamfamilyWritings on August 24, 2012 at 1:01 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Nice. Do you mean childhood notions can't survive the growth to adulthood?

Hi 2902, this poem was more about how it was when I was a kid. My mom was pretty abusive, and I learned to always put on a smile and make excuses for the bruises to teachers and the "outside" world. It was kinda funny really, the teachers  would always comment on my report card what a pleasure I was to have in class and how I was always smiling. Nobody figured out that the smile glued to my face was a front. So "the lie beneath the  truth" was what people saw vs. what was really going on and how I felt inside. Thanks for the read and comment. I always appreciate your time and enjoy your comments. 

posted by RamfamilyWritings on August 24, 2012 at 12:59 PM | link to this | reply

Nice. Do you mean childhood notions can't survive the growth to adulthood?

posted by 2902 on August 24, 2012 at 11:03 AM | link to this | reply

I know of many who miss those old days.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on August 24, 2012 at 9:26 AM | link to this | reply

yes....we all wear masks....

posted by Annicita on August 24, 2012 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply