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Oh wait..ok..so I'm slow...I get it...makes you want to cough, the smoke...Haha! 
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RamfamilyWritings
on August 19, 2012 at 2:16 PM
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Thanks FS, I really like adding images to my work, it kind of lends a feeling to it. As always I appreciate the visit and comment. Have a great day/weekend. 
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 19, 2012 at 2:15 PM
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I love hwo you use imagery in this poem.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on August 19, 2012 at 2:05 PM
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Lol, thank you Annicita, I think the rhyming started some where back in kindergarten. Lol! I try to write poems that don't have rhyme and it just doesnt' work for me. I wish I could write like you and others and just make it flow.
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 19, 2012 at 10:37 AM
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Makes you want to cough...Lol? I don't know exactly how to take that. I suppose I'll take it as a compliment tho...
Thanks for the visit and comment, I appreciate your time.
posted by
RamfamilyWritings
on August 19, 2012 at 10:35 AM
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i dont know how you do it....i hate trying to write with words rhymning...good job
posted by
Annicita
on August 19, 2012 at 7:44 AM
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There is truth in some of this, it still makes me want to cough, I suppose a poem that is dead would not have any effect
posted by
C_C_T
on August 18, 2012 at 10:58 PM
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