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You wrote the poem well although you mentioned about writer's block at the very beginning
posted by
adventurer02
on November 17, 2015 at 11:10 PM
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You did a fine job with this one! It was a cool read although melancholy it still had great advice at the end! sam 
posted by
sam444
on May 10, 2012 at 5:53 PM
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Just write what you like Kabu , it releives the tension and some of us can nip little gems from your writing, no I did not mean that, I think I will pass.
posted by
C_C_T
on May 10, 2012 at 12:01 AM
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This is grand writing Grandmummy. I love you.
posted by
lovelyladymonk
on May 9, 2012 at 6:36 PM
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Embrace your mind's blankness when it comes. Don't fight it. Pretend it is your clean slate. Concentrate on that and soon enough it will fill itself with sprouts from the idea seeds you didn't know lay dormant in the soil of your mind.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 9, 2012 at 6:16 PM
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All in fun - that was weird - does your gnome - have a beard? End of the day - take a break - put up your feet - so they won't ache! 
posted by
JimmyA
on May 9, 2012 at 1:44 PM
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Kabu or is it Ubak or Abuk or Buka
All fun not so much as Kabu. Depression not so! I am changing that one into Impressive! Yes that is you, you are an impressive lady, so write what you want the way you want and all of us will want to read it.
posted by
Justi
on May 9, 2012 at 1:28 PM
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I enjoyed reading this poem...I myself like poems that rhyme.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on May 9, 2012 at 9:50 AM
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Getting into a rhythm or rhyme can help a sad girl pass the time
a happy tempo on a day in May is sure to shine up skies of gray.
posted by
Pat_B
on May 9, 2012 at 9:42 AM
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