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 Such BEAUTIFUL music!

posted by BrightIrish on April 29, 2012 at 12:49 PM | link to this | reply

Beautifully written, Kabu, and one can tell that you have used Nature to heal and calm, which it can do so well if we take the time to listen.

posted by adnohr on April 29, 2012 at 4:07 AM | link to this | reply

The sounds speak in words in your poem......

posted by Straightforward on April 29, 2012 at 3:05 AM | link to this | reply

I love it

You are so talented.

posted by skye08 on April 28, 2012 at 10:43 PM | link to this | reply

Kabuiepie-;)

That was so beautiful I had to read it for quite awhile. You described this place of ours to perfection even though right now it's cold, na d sun for the first time in weeks. I love you.

posted by WileyJohn on April 28, 2012 at 8:08 PM | link to this | reply

Fantastic, when are you at the Met?

posted by Justi on April 28, 2012 at 6:49 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu

I love your orchestra!

posted by Nautikos on April 28, 2012 at 6:08 PM | link to this | reply

Both words and photo

are breathtaking.  

posted by Bel_Marshall on April 28, 2012 at 2:26 PM | link to this | reply

This is very dynamic and I have to agree on the close! This post was very captivating, too! sam 

posted by sam444 on April 28, 2012 at 11:35 AM | link to this | reply

I can just hear all of those sounds that you describe in this poem.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on April 28, 2012 at 11:25 AM | link to this | reply

This is lovely Grandmummy...No, exquisite!  Don't change a word!

posted by lovelyladymonk on April 28, 2012 at 10:41 AM | link to this | reply

The world is very, very, very full

posted by DKosef on April 28, 2012 at 10:21 AM | link to this | reply

that was quit different for you, but very good.  Is it raining there?

posted by Lanetay on April 28, 2012 at 10:18 AM | link to this | reply

Yes I quite liked it Kabu it is honest and many of us are not.

posted by C_C_T on April 28, 2012 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

So true!

posted by shamasehar on April 28, 2012 at 7:31 AM | link to this | reply

Amen to that...

posted by Pat_B on April 28, 2012 at 7:20 AM | link to this | reply