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Re: shobana
It did? I am delighted to hear that, thank you
posted by
lionreign
on September 30, 2011 at 6:25 AM
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Re: powerful imagery
Thanks Randir, I love your description of Autumn too
posted by
lionreign
on September 30, 2011 at 6:23 AM
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Re: UtahJay
Thank you, I suppose in a way each one does - they are written one day after the next
posted by
lionreign
on September 30, 2011 at 6:21 AM
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Re: Whisperer4U
Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it
posted by
lionreign
on September 30, 2011 at 6:19 AM
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Re: Troosha
Thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on September 30, 2011 at 6:16 AM
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Re: C_C_T
To be fair, it was a surprise for me - I often feel quite glum amidst the grey
posted by
lionreign
on September 30, 2011 at 6:09 AM
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Re: To stand and feel truly free now there is no money in the world
thanks Kabu, I think you are right there...
posted by
lionreign
on September 30, 2011 at 6:04 AM
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I loved how the whole poem makes one feel free Lion - great job.
posted by
shobana
on September 29, 2011 at 11:21 PM
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powerful imagery
I like the iron in it.
In my mind's eye I see that ominous overcast, yet set off with the brilliance of autumn leaves wet and burning. Or when that sudden beam of light slips under the hem of the clouds at sunset, and strikes what it touches into vivid color against the gray.
posted by
Randir
on September 29, 2011 at 5:24 PM
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Your poetry continues to touch me, it is as if each one builds on the last.
posted by
UtahJay
on September 29, 2011 at 4:09 PM
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Your day may be grey, but, your imagery is full of color
posted by
Whisperer4U
on September 29, 2011 at 3:31 PM
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Loved your choice of imagery to describe the hues of autumn!
posted by
Troosha
on September 29, 2011 at 11:43 AM
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Good feeling Lion, not many can say that on a grey day.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 29, 2011 at 9:54 AM
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To stand and feel truly free now there is no money in the world
that can buy that.
posted by
Kabu
on September 29, 2011 at 8:35 AM
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