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I loved this story and I have always been a big fan of a picnic and in most any setting! sam
posted by
sam444
on September 22, 2011 at 2:13 PM
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Sounds like fun! The youth will always have the most fun. great story!
posted by
Inspired7211
on September 21, 2011 at 4:00 PM
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I had not anticipated the twist and that the two were old and widowed. I have really really enjoyed the write and your storytelling style.
posted by
anib
on September 20, 2011 at 5:44 PM
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Yes a lovely story Kabu. Perhaps we should write as much as we can before it becomes too tiring. Perhaps yawn, yawn. No matter.
posted by
C_C_T
on September 20, 2011 at 11:52 AM
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Wonderful story, Kabu - and a perfect ending. An adult fairy tale - we all need them now & then!
posted by
adnohr
on September 20, 2011 at 3:14 AM
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I love picnics too Kabu and been a long time since I had one organized...
posted by
shobana
on September 19, 2011 at 8:50 PM
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Oh my goodness there is always the next day after birthdays, Christmas and all those especially wonderfull days then normal sets in and it too is good, just different. Love and bes wishes.
posted by
Justi
on September 19, 2011 at 6:57 PM
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A magical delight, Kabu
posted by
Whisperer4U
on September 19, 2011 at 6:21 PM
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Kabuiepie-;)
A delightful story so well written love and now you'll have to dream up another one to keep us all entertained by your own magic.
posted by
WileyJohn
on September 19, 2011 at 5:15 PM
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get me whatever was in the basket
posted by
Lanetay
on September 19, 2011 at 3:58 PM
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Delightful story, perfectly told.
How sweet to enjoy being young again, if only for an afternoon.
Write on!
posted by
Pat_B
on September 19, 2011 at 1:56 PM
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Give me some of what the child spiked it with!! so I can look and act a bigger fool than I already do working with people less than half my age!!
posted by
mariss9
on September 19, 2011 at 1:27 PM
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May they have this dream over and over again!
posted by
reasons
on September 19, 2011 at 1:07 PM
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I was sympathizing with them trying to get up off of the ground. One day I was walking around the side yard here and stepped in a little grass-covered hole and it threw me to the ground. I wasn't hurt, but I couldn't believe at how clumsy I was getting back up with nothing to hold on to.
posted by
TAPS.
on September 19, 2011 at 12:15 PM
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This is the perfect ending for the story, I feel. I love that the change is temporary. That adds a different dynamic.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on September 19, 2011 at 10:54 AM
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