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I wondered if Teddy pursued his interest of Josie? ChCh I like the descriptiveness throughout this - the bowler hat , the bicycling, the dialogue alone gives imagery…- all the philandering and such of Tom - and now he’s givin’ advice and all - now with Thelma and Elsie (gotta love it) - you’re so vividly creative, yes a writer you are, dear ChCh - this has me very interested. 
write on ~ E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on July 5, 2011 at 11:08 AM
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It would seem that every village on earth, and every metropolis, all have their share
of bedroom problems. You do know how to tell it like it is.
posted by
TAPS.
on July 5, 2011 at 6:49 AM
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So good to have you back. You are a magnificant story teller.
posted by
Justi
on July 4, 2011 at 8:53 PM
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I am getting to know this village and it is so full of colorful people. of
gossip and yes disatisfaction and unrest. people have such expectations but forget to continue to work at what started out as the most important thing to them...and no work...that is always tough on relationships. a great read CC.
posted by
Kabu
on July 4, 2011 at 4:46 PM
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This is such a joy to read! It is laden with inquisitiveness, insight, heritage, probables and even a little advice! I like how it seems so real and could happen in any setting at any time anywhere in the world for that matter! It reads very well, too! Very nice work CC!!!! Bravo!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 4, 2011 at 2:27 PM
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