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Oh I have to get the rest of this story. Great.

posted by Justi on March 6, 2011 at 8:25 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu
Very well written! I can see myself in that kitchen and feel little Mary's anxiety...

posted by Nautikos on March 5, 2011 at 8:35 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu, right away our hearts go out to the two little girls....
One feels compelled to read on to see what happens next..

posted by Rumor on March 5, 2011 at 12:43 PM | link to this | reply

How would I get your letter, I am a total newbie in the stocks (even the penny ones), is it a joke?  I will listen to any insider information you have to send me!! That's why I got my program. 

posted by mariss9 on March 4, 2011 at 9:46 PM | link to this | reply

So sad for a child to growing through such a scary situation.

posted by FormerStudentIntern on March 4, 2011 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

What can I say?  I just want to read more of it.

posted by TAPS. on March 4, 2011 at 12:57 PM | link to this | reply

Kabu
I love when you give us a taste of your engaging fiction.    

posted by Troosha on March 4, 2011 at 12:36 PM | link to this | reply

Kabuiepie-;)
You painted a very graphic picture of such sadness love and I shall wait for the next installment with great anticipation.Marvelous love.

posted by WileyJohn on March 4, 2011 at 11:15 AM | link to this | reply

Poor Mary has to grow up fast.  Terror strikes in an instant in a sinister setting.  Everyone takes off at the worst time.  What will the poor girl do?

posted by mariss9 on March 4, 2011 at 10:03 AM | link to this | reply

I'm coming in a bit late
to this one but am already hooked!

posted by malcolm on March 4, 2011 at 10:01 AM | link to this | reply

this is so creepy and horrible! Ewww!!!
Mistress, may I please have more?

posted by Pat_B on March 4, 2011 at 9:57 AM | link to this | reply

wow makes one appreciate some of our modern conveniences

posted by Lanetay on March 4, 2011 at 9:35 AM | link to this | reply

And then? Loving this story, Kabu!

posted by adnohr on March 4, 2011 at 9:04 AM | link to this | reply