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I am glad I don't have to repeat my teenage years! ugh!
posted by
Inspired7211
on February 6, 2011 at 6:36 AM
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Re: Haunting and fascinating undertones, CC!
Thank you Raye, when one has lived amongst them, bit different today
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:47 PM
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Well I did change it quite a bit E,E, I like to cut out the dead words or wood as we naturalists say
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:45 PM
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Yes the youngsters should be made to dig gardens beginning with mine Taps you can have second place.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:42 PM
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Re: very interesting dialogue between the old man and Thomas, C.C...
Yes I don't think people realise hat one can learn fom an old fellow Rumor, If I find one still alive I will try to pick his brain
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:40 PM
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Re: I always enjoy your dialogue, it makes a story very real. Clever chap.
Been there Kabu, just memories.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:38 PM
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Well I imagined so Sam, but over the years I have seen a lot of women who wouldn't leave the house. Much better than Alzheimer's, but a very progressive phobia, perhaps better treatment is available now, perhaps it was the onset . Once people just wandered about in the villages with this disease and were accepted, of course earlier a fair few were probably treated if that is the right word as witches.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 4, 2011 at 12:37 PM
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I did enjoy the interaction of youth and elderly! I couldn't help but think she had Alzheimer's! Am I off base on his? I got that from him taking flowers but she would never really know they were from him. And his atonement seemed to be for himself which I thought was poignant! Well done nonetheless! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 4, 2011 at 7:09 AM
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I always enjoy your dialogue, it makes a story very real. Clever chap.
posted by
Kabu
on February 3, 2011 at 6:20 PM
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very interesting dialogue between the old man and Thomas, C.C...
nicely done and rich in meaning (undertones, as has been said)....well worth the reader's attention for thoughtful musings.
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posted by
Rumor
on February 3, 2011 at 10:54 AM
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I love it. Actually, I love communications between old persons and teens. It is just what both need to make/keep them human beings.
posted by
TAPS.
on February 3, 2011 at 8:50 AM
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I like the imagery here ChCh --- the moss covered gates calls to me. I like that vision ~ I recall this piece of yours. It touched me then and it moves me now. Very dear poem here. All around, great writing... E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on February 3, 2011 at 7:38 AM
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Haunting and fascinating undertones, CC!
Good poetry/writing in general is about undertones, methinks, and this fits the bill..
posted by
Raye09
on February 3, 2011 at 7:21 AM
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