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ChCh --- this is so powerful --- like a portrait bearing so much. Brings about passion and feelings. Beautiful poem - rather fantastic poetry ~ E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on January 10, 2011 at 10:56 PM
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WOW! Outstanding imagery; the close was stupendous! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 9, 2011 at 5:27 PM
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What a talented poet you are CC.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on January 8, 2011 at 1:27 PM
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blacksmith and young girl - so different and yet so much alike....
Hardened in their own ways, and yet one senses a softness in both...but both are blinded by their hardness to whatever love could possibly exist, if they were to give it a chance.....so real, C.C., I could hear the clang of the smithy's anvil and feel the heat from the fire...
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posted by
Rumor
on January 8, 2011 at 9:47 AM
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An unrequited love story told in the old English way CC...great metaphor and substance in this poem.
posted by
shobana
on January 8, 2011 at 4:03 AM
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Re: Blacksmith.
Thank you LB I am glad that you liked the poem.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 7, 2011 at 11:58 PM
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Thank you FS not many blacksmith left now,
posted by
C_C_T
on January 7, 2011 at 11:56 PM
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Re: CC
Yes Wiley Sadly it still happens Thank you
posted by
C_C_T
on January 7, 2011 at 11:55 PM
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Re: sometimesCC....your poetry tellsme such a story I am lostfor words.
Thank you Kabu you make it worth the bother
posted by
C_C_T
on January 7, 2011 at 11:54 PM
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Blacksmith.
Fabulous poem! Wonderfully written, I really enjoy
posted by
MsJudy
on January 7, 2011 at 8:47 PM
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Reading this I felt as though I were there. All walks of life experience the highs and lows of love in the same manner.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on January 7, 2011 at 4:33 PM
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CC
Wonderful poetry my friend and content not to have memories like that as a grandfather.
posted by
WileyJohn
on January 7, 2011 at 1:50 PM
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sometimesCC....your poetry tellsme such a story I am lostfor words.
This is a keeper for me.....the written picture of physical labour and mental anguish is blended to perfection........ Dickens.....!
posted by
Kabu
on January 7, 2011 at 1:23 PM
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