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Well Taps these are mainly reposts which I tighten up perhaps one is careless on the first write. Thank
you.
posted by
C_C_T
on January 1, 2011 at 12:30 AM
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These poems just seem to flow from you with such ease and grace.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 31, 2010 at 2:42 PM
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Re: C.C. ...a sad but true part of life and growing up...
Well Rumor if one was very young perhaps what is that wondering if one can smoke a ciggy,
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C_C_T
on December 31, 2010 at 7:39 AM
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Re: C.C. ...a sad but true part of life and growing up...
Lo Sam yes I got the tingle I will now try and dispense your pain. I did do that with my car keys, cost a bomb to have new ones registered.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 31, 2010 at 7:36 AM
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C.C. ...a sad but true part of life and growing up...
it doesn't always go as planned..but we live and learn by our mistakes....whimsical, the youthful tragedy of it all is still very much there.
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posted by
Rumor
on December 31, 2010 at 7:10 AM
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I think the new boyfriend shaking the fist and a thrown shoe might be a good hint! Great imagery nonetheless! I have had a miserable headache today, I slept the day away to no avail and then had to take a very strong pain killer so if my comments don't make sense, it's about the meds! Christopher's flight was changed, he was at the airport in Boise at 5:00 am this morning and didn't arrive in Detroit until midnight their time! Poor kid! I washed my phone in the laundry on Monday and just got in touch with him this evening! I say, check those pockets and haste makes waste, I am guilty of both! However, I went to my carrier's sight, bought a refurbished phone for 10 bucks and if the damn thing would stay on I could say I made out like a bandit but not to this point! I am going to leave it on the charger for the night and see what tomorrow brings! I hope you are feeling better these days! If not, here's a blown kiss
that tingles when it makes its destination! lol sam
posted by
sam444
on December 30, 2010 at 11:48 PM
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Well as I said Lion it could happen I suppose Thank you.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 11:47 PM
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thank you E,E, Just taking a breather,
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 11:45 PM
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Re: Problems
Well C.G it was only meant as a joke poem. Who would be that nutty. Would they?
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 11:44 PM
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Re: Awe, howit can hurt, those early rejections......hated being dumped in the
In a flock or a gang there is always the little outsider Kabu, we all know what it feels like.
Sadly also there is usually a bully which we would like to exterminate.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 11:40 PM
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Re: CC
Got it in one Wiley one couldn't go far on a bike.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 11:36 PM
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Surprisingly vanishes when another dose clicks in FS. But that little black space is always there.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 11:35 PM
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The death of true love can be an incredibly slow and painful process.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 30, 2010 at 4:21 PM
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CC
I hated those rejections but I learned in time it would have been better if I hadn't sought to win one of them so hard. A great poem my friend and I hope life finds you in good health again old chap.
posted by
WileyJohn
on December 30, 2010 at 3:33 PM
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Awe, howit can hurt, those early rejections......hated being dumped in the
summer time when the beach parties were in fullswing.It was terrible to be looking on from the wet sand while couples smooched in the shadows.
posted by
Kabu
on December 30, 2010 at 3:29 PM
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Problems
Sounds a bit sulky and with possable innuendo... unsure about this one Mr ChiffChaff. However as it's you...
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 30, 2010 at 12:35 PM
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This is a fine re-write - and it is just as touching. The long for lost 'first' love is so real here...it reminds me of my youth. This is great writing, ChCh ~ Have a wonderful day. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on December 30, 2010 at 8:40 AM
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How very sad, beautifully written tragedy
posted by
lionreign
on December 30, 2010 at 7:33 AM
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