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You're doing good with the tweeking ~ very good. I need to do it myself - and it's a good idea, ChCh ~ I can't wait to read more. E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on December 30, 2010 at 9:12 PM
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Thank you FS not all little ones are so friendly as you know,
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 12:35 AM
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Re: a poem of youthful optimism, and Elaine is a lucky young lady
Right on the button Rumor young friends make good old friends
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 12:33 AM
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Thank you Taps it makes me want to keep going.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 12:31 AM
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Re: Friends
Lo C.G thank you, well I know you like cheery things, did you get your camera?
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 12:30 AM
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Re: This is lovely dear friend and a rewrite I think which is great.
Tough as an old Boot Sweetie a pain in the groin but that's getting better , be very careful getting out of baths or showers with wet feet and the climbing step ladders, A neighbor I had once climbed an apple tree on a ladder and reached out to get the last big apple, slipped and that was curtains it was a sort of morbid joke amongst the smallholders as he was very frugal, although he did give me a little tiny pot of honey every year.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 12:28 AM
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Thank you Sam a bit bleak, but keep busy, you have giving him what he needed.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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Thank you EE . I don't know if you find it the same, but I very often have to tweek the poem after posting, it is a job to keep looking at the same words and and to get them right.
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C_C_T
on December 30, 2010 at 12:20 AM
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THIS is just plainly lovely and adoring --- full of spring like activity and artistic in imagery...like a bouquet all within this verse. and the joy of youth and young love ~ just perfect ChCh ~ Aww have a fantastic day ~ E.E.
posted by
elysianfields
on December 29, 2010 at 10:09 PM
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I liked the youthfulness of it all as well! My soldier is gone and I am a bit forlorn but it won't be long until he returns! I hope you are feeling better! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 29, 2010 at 9:37 PM
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This is lovely dear friend and a rewrite I think which is great.
At least we know that you are still around, but I worry.
posted by
Kabu
on December 29, 2010 at 4:48 PM
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Friends
Your poem was nice Chiff-Chaff. I liked it. I like bumble bees and buttercups. I think you like Mars bars...
But I also know you have a way with words.
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 29, 2010 at 4:37 PM
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I am addicted to your cute poems, and to your beautiful flowers.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 29, 2010 at 1:05 PM
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a poem of youthful optimism, and Elaine is a lucky young lady
to have someone like you, C.C., to look after her..
...who knows what may happen to "friends" in a couple of years?...
posted by
Rumor
on December 29, 2010 at 11:57 AM
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I like how the speaker speaks and through the words indicates what the other person is saying.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on December 29, 2010 at 11:42 AM
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