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Re: the Dandelion Kids' life is much like that "barren vale", C.C. ...Rumor
Well Rumor if one plays around no one takes one seriously. Thank you for your observation.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 20, 2010 at 12:21 AM
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Re: TAPS
Thank you Taps. I think this was fun to write.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 20, 2010 at 12:19 AM
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Re: The longing and acceptance in this poem has set me thinking back Kabu
Yes but each time you made yourself believe it was the bees knees Kabu but the honey pot ran dry. Well it is full up this time, keep topping it up,
posted by
C_C_T
on December 20, 2010 at 12:18 AM
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Re: Shobana
Thank you Shobana Always wistful but resilient capturing and releasing before being
disillusioned, butterflies of course.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 20, 2010 at 12:13 AM
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Re: Dandelion Kid CG
Well a little bit of truth in every poem C.G. Well at that time.
posted by
C_C_T
on December 20, 2010 at 12:07 AM
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Re: SAM
It was a repost Sam but I just found it and sometimes alter them and forget it, any way a lot of folk were not around a year ago and one can sneak one or two in,
posted by
C_C_T
on December 20, 2010 at 12:05 AM
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Charming! Until her wedding day was too precious! KUDOS and BRAVO!!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on December 19, 2010 at 8:41 PM
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Dandelion Kid
Gr eat poem and I hope that is a bit of tongue in cheek humour in the last line rather than sadness. I liked it all but I liked the last line as a kind of punchline. 
posted by
Cheerygirl
on December 19, 2010 at 4:39 PM
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Excellent poem "dandelion kid"..(the kid with the lion's teeth). Somewhat wistful CC and you managed to capture the stillness of love beautifully.
posted by
shobana
on December 19, 2010 at 1:28 PM
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The longing and acceptance in this poem has set me thinking back
to most of my life I thought true love wasn't for me.....then of course came Wiley!
posted by
Kabu
on December 19, 2010 at 12:23 PM
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Awwwww..... I love it.
posted by
TAPS.
on December 19, 2010 at 10:08 AM
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the Dandelion Kids' life is much like that "barren vale", C.C. ...
his life feel empty to him as all the pretty girls leave him like the seeds of his dandelions....great imagery and metaphor, my friend..
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posted by
Rumor
on December 19, 2010 at 9:48 AM
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