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I wonder what is going on with her mother as well! I think choking on the bun was rather startling for a story that was moving along at a nice cadence! But it does keep the interest alive! sam
posted by
sam444
on March 23, 2010 at 7:38 PM
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E.E.
It is more relaxing than writing poems E.E. I don't think this is really clever, it is probably a peep into a world where everything is gentle and mysterious, but I am glad you like it, I'll just let it run until it becomes a chore, the problem is one can't see fairies when one becomes five years old. Well that is what the gnome told me once. Thank you for your comments.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 16, 2010 at 12:23 PM
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This is sorta suspensful yes? I wonder what is occurring with her mommy? And I like how you bring in the feelings of that when a new babe ~ how the birdies told her (you're a clever writer CC, anyone ever tell ya' that?) and now, with all the thrills I've visited here in visions...I hate to leave this story - I will be back for the next segment. (I hope this is a long-winded er longer write el Corncrake because I do like stories)
~ E.L. (oh and as far as your question; I left a longwinded response myself back on the Goat blog for you and simply, I haven't a clue if others go back to read comments on their blogs. I write naturally - naturally respond ~ but, as you say for time management it can require just that.
posted by
elysianfields
on March 16, 2010 at 12:03 PM
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