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I will remember the correlation to big feet! lol sam
posted by
sam444
on March 11, 2010 at 3:25 AM
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The furry tongue got to me. LOL
It reminded me of when I was a kid and how my mom used to encourage us to brush our teeth regularly by accusing us of having moss growing on our teeth. She would always add, "...and brush your tongue too. It will make your breath smell better."
posted by
TAPS.
on March 8, 2010 at 7:58 AM
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Re: Dialogue
Thank you for your compliments I.E. The gnome nearly fell over when he read the page, but he did need straightening out, the elves have agreed to take him down to the workshop and make him real again, he should never have been let run around on his own. These are dangerous times, but we didn't want him to be recycled as Noman suggested, It was only so he could have a new fleece. E.E.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 7, 2010 at 11:30 PM
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Re: More culture......why the magic world is elegant culture handed down or new
Yes one likes to lift one's head out of the trough occasionally, the refined notice.
posted by
C_C_T
on March 7, 2010 at 11:20 PM
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More culture......why the magic world is elegant culture handed down or new
born perfect just as it is. Besides your descriptive write about gas was very elegantly put. quite refined really
posted by
Kabu
on March 7, 2010 at 11:46 AM
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Above all Corncrake, keep the dialogue ~ it's great!!!!
I am mesmerized by the descriptive quality throughout - "metre of clover" and of getting wind - bellyache from all that was tasted, yes I believe one would get that... LOL ~ and these are monster Gnomes? the more caricature type eh? with big feet and funny tusky teeth? I am loving all this creativity ~ Corncrake I do think you are, the epitome of E.E. ~
~ El
posted by
elysianfields
on March 7, 2010 at 10:05 AM
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