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Only a true poet could reach the heart this way ....could see the beauty of
life long love, could write with such clarity so that tears fill my eyes.

posted by Kabu on February 28, 2010 at 2:34 PM | link to this | reply

Touching, Corncrake!

posted by Straightforward on February 28, 2010 at 8:46 AM | link to this | reply

 Yes Corncrake - this touched my heart with utter beauty and sentimentality and good - This was wonderful - this 'is' lovely, tender writing.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on February 28, 2010 at 7:38 AM | link to this | reply

I like it when poets write about the things they observe! This was a very poignant ending that touches deeply: Let me hold that hand, my dear,
Dim not your sight with tears, my love"
Well done and kudos! sam

posted by sam444 on February 28, 2010 at 7:18 AM | link to this | reply