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I loved mysterious and beautiful! This was a great line: ‘Good work Albert another star earned for initiative we shall need men like you in the Bumskin Association.’ I love it, your imagination has no end! KUDOS!!! sam
posted by
sam444
on February 8, 2010 at 3:06 AM
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Re: Thanks Elyse
Quite honestly I don't know what will happen, this has got to write itself, but I don't think Arthur is the kind of person who would deliberately do the dirty on someone. But- no I don't think that Dogrose saying would be appropriate
posted by
C_C_T
on February 7, 2010 at 11:54 PM
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Re: I like the wa you got right into the women war very well done.
When you've got a warm glove over your head you don't realize your feet are cold.
An old Dogrose saying.
Dorothing was speaking from her creator's viewpoint, I shall have to warn the professor, she must retain her innocence.
Arthur has no illusions about anything, but he has a fault of wanting to get the last word in.
posted by
C_C_T
on February 7, 2010 at 11:44 PM
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Oh my Dorothy does expound on the honeymoon night eh? and I love the comments, "is Penny safe with Dorothy? and their response: "safer than you will be with Penny" 'that's comedic wit. I truly like your style.
and now I wonder ~ will the jewelry all come out now and will Granny live a nice longer life and will Penny and Arthur finally tie the knot? I guess I have to come back to find out
it sounds like everything is going back to more normal in the town. Elyse (I will try not to ask so many questions)
posted by
elysianfields
on February 7, 2010 at 8:03 PM
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I like the wa you got right into the women war very well done.
Why I'm not even sure that I know which one was the victor but that Penny is too smug to have been defeated. Yeah.Arthur will of course suffer a little punishment but not too much since she has vanquished the opposition. Dorothy did try I'llgive her that much but she went toofar over the top about the wedding night. Any real woman would tell that it were a lie.
The secret is dear friend....(ladies don't achieve much fun from the first time) .....
posted by
Kabu
on February 7, 2010 at 1:04 PM
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