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posted by mneme on January 27, 2010 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply


posted by mneme on January 27, 2010 at 2:03 PM | link to this | reply

Nicely done
This had a great rhythm

posted by lionreign on January 27, 2010 at 7:59 AM | link to this | reply

Bernie
Very well done... I don't typically enjoy rhyming poetry (mostly because some people miss the mark when it comes to the rhythm but this poem had an excellent beat).  

posted by Troosha on January 27, 2010 at 7:14 AM | link to this | reply

Very awesome imagery! A fine poem for the damsel in distress! It felt so Camelot as was previously stated, too! sam

posted by sam444 on January 27, 2010 at 4:05 AM | link to this | reply

Knight
I think you might have sat at the round table in King Arthur's time. Nice one.

posted by C_C_T on January 27, 2010 at 12:23 AM | link to this | reply

Bernie

: Cool. You have your own Camelot! BC-A, Bill’s RJLst

posted by BC-A on January 26, 2010 at 11:17 PM | link to this | reply

 Sounds like a true Knight ~ more a King ~ this is very heartening and gentle in it's strength and power.  Lovely tribute ~ Elyse

posted by elysianfields on January 26, 2010 at 9:39 PM | link to this | reply