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You know truly I am mesmerized by the scenes and descriptive imagery... even the 'tin of Nestles milk' stops me while I visualize. and its a good reminder that I need to give my husband more than a pear for lunch eh?
(just kidding) I like your word choices --- "sossled" and "dilling". Onto the next chapter, I'm stoked for what I'll find. Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 25, 2010 at 4:55 AM
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I like how you cleverly place the nuances throughout the story!. sam
posted by
sam444
on January 23, 2010 at 3:36 PM
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Re: Hmnnnnnnnnnnnn moving along but I would like to know exactly
Kabu do you want to take all the fun out of my life, some women are truly wonderful, but, but,but,but, this is not a romantic story, tut, tut, tut, time is not of an essence, whatever that means. However I will keep your advice in good stead and be kinder to Penny. I was going to put if she apologises but Arthur is not like that. Can you tell them what a marvellous cook one's self is?
posted by
C_C_T
on January 23, 2010 at 12:27 PM
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Hmnnnnnnnnnnnn moving along but I would like to know exactly
why Penny is upset and even more why you don't go to her and be honest open and find out exactly what your feelings for each other really are. Women aren't all that mysterious...they just want real love...to be held tight after (
sex) and lots of attention and your time. To understand exactly the moment they want your help and exactly when they don't.....Oh and to never ever tell them what a good cook your Mummy was.
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Kabu
on January 23, 2010 at 11:36 AM
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