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 I liked this one with its ending too. Reading your yarns makes me feel like I'm watching one of those TV series - like an English or Australian Coronation Street, kind of....

posted by adnohr on January 16, 2010 at 10:05 PM | link to this | reply

Corncrake, the dialogue is great:  "bladdy tokens" and  even pickup at "half-three" --- I so enjoy your 'english' so to speak.  and I giggled about them all nodding at the Herbert stories --- just so funny ~ and the featherbed --- sigh, but I do like featherbeds ~ how lovely the end.  Just perfect.  Elyse

posted by elysianfields on January 16, 2010 at 5:56 PM | link to this | reply

Adored the end and I pleasantly sigh! sam

posted by sam444 on January 15, 2010 at 5:04 PM | link to this | reply

Corncrake you are just an old romantic.This is a great yarn
I enjoyed every word.........But there is trouble brewing I can feel it in my bones.

posted by Kabu on January 15, 2010 at 12:39 PM | link to this | reply