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Re: Elyse
Thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 7:28 AM
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Re: Your rapture radiates through every word, Lionreign...
Thank you so much PoetRaye
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 7:28 AM
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Re: Sam444
thank you, sweetie. You found the ending sad? I had hoped for it to be uplifting after the sadness of the earlier poem...
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 7:23 AM
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Re: A beautiful and warm poem
Thank you Sky08
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 6:42 AM
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Re: TAPS
It is only temporary, and usually not so bleak as it first seems... but I am never able to maintain a grim outlook for long
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 6:42 AM
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Re: shobana
Thank you so much
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 6:32 AM
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Re: chuck_ibrahim
thank you Chuck
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 6:30 AM
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Re: Truly warming visually
Thanks malcolm, I rather think it is
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 6:27 AM
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Re: wow!
Thank you!
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 6:26 AM
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Re: Sinome
thank you sweetie... I see what you are saying, but I am perfectly happy marvelling at the green blade in the middle of a heatwave LOL
posted by
lionreign
on January 12, 2010 at 6:26 AM
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Bearing it all and hope arrives ~ this is awesome for lack of the wonder I feel when I read this. and I read and read ---
Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on January 12, 2010 at 4:11 AM
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Your rapture radiates through every word, Lionreign...
Breathtaking, my friend!
posted by
Katray2
on January 11, 2010 at 8:05 PM
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I adored the rainbow's smile! This is just excellent imagery and of course I loved the word placement! The end was a bit sad, but still a fine poem! sam
posted by
sam444
on January 11, 2010 at 5:09 PM
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A beautiful and warm poem
posted by
skye08
on January 11, 2010 at 4:12 PM
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I like to remember that bleak is only temporary.
Even here, you did not allow it to remain long, not even to the end of the poem.
That's good.
posted by
TAPS.
on January 11, 2010 at 2:42 PM
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Oh how lovely..absent arms? Very romantic and great imagery. Thank you for your visit and kind comment.
posted by
shobana
on January 11, 2010 at 2:30 PM
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I think Sinome gave you what you deserve. I love your vivid imagery
thank you for sharing and thanks for visiting my Blog.
posted by
Chuck_E_Ibrahim
on January 11, 2010 at 2:27 PM
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Truly warming visually
I think the pot of gold must be in your hands
posted by
malcolm
on January 11, 2010 at 12:03 PM
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wow!
posted by
Star5_
on January 11, 2010 at 9:16 AM
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Oh my gawd Neil... this poem is so fabulous I am speechless !!! Your vision of a rainbow amidsts the desolation of a winter sky melts my heart :-) That is the beauty of this season sweetie, the contrasts Nature offers us... like a cardinal sitting, its plumage all warm, red and brilliant, on the ice covered branch of a naked tree... or the green spot a frost forgotten blade of grass offers, flapping to the wind, in the center of a snow blanketed meadow. Gorgeous poem Neil... xoxoxoxo
posted by
Sinome
on January 11, 2010 at 9:02 AM
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