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I have this problem with reading anything long and drawn out losing interest and not finishing but you have me really in to this, very interesting
posted by
Lanetay
on October 18, 2009 at 5:13 AM
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There are times when we just need to let people go! A bane and a blessing depending on the point of view! I like the idea of 3rd person! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on October 12, 2009 at 6:12 PM
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I like how you changed the point of views...I did not expect her to still be alive.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on October 12, 2009 at 4:53 PM
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very adictive so it's shaping upwellwhen itholds the attention like this.
posted by
Kabu
on October 12, 2009 at 1:54 PM
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Excellent plot and dialogue Betty! Thanks very much for your visit and kind comment and letter. I hope you and Ina and family are doing well. Will write soon. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on October 12, 2009 at 11:09 AM
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Some days I know just how the gramma felt.
I feel like taking off every so often -- thinking I'd have more fun back in Seattle than here in e-ville. But then I get involved in a project and things settle down again... Love this one, very clear, great dialog. Now I just want to know what next...
posted by
Pat_B
on October 12, 2009 at 4:12 AM
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Well, it's a surprise too that she went off like that..well just to let you know I read your comment too. Thanks Elinjo for stopping by with that lovely comment. Yes we did have a great time together and proud moment for us. have a nice day too.
posted by
shobana
on October 12, 2009 at 1:06 AM
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Oh --- so this is becoming more mysterious ~ I like your manner of dialogue proving anxst and the detective's dutiful questions were great --- I am piqued - very interesting. I would like to read more -
~ Elyse
posted by
elysianfields
on October 11, 2009 at 10:36 PM
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Ah, now I got it where you were going. Vrey consistent and lively story. You do have a gift for dialogue. Thanks for your comment on the games. I play chess, but online chess is no fun!!! Half of the pleasure is to
see your opponent sweat and plot. Much like poker.
posted by
vogue
on October 11, 2009 at 10:30 PM
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