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Wonderfully smooth
I love the break in your flow of thought it's so smooth almost like shifting gears in a high performance sports car. Coming out of first gear is like a release of power and every shift after that is a tribute to the journey
posted by
GeorgeEdwinJohns
on July 27, 2009 at 3:37 PM
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oooh it's such a struggle this battle for hope
posted by
mysteria
on July 26, 2009 at 5:29 PM
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Very good and all so true. Fear always stands there...waiting to choke hope. We must be on guard for sure.
posted by
RASSE
on July 26, 2009 at 12:55 PM
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Hope can be choked so quickly by fear! Nice work! sam
posted by
sam444
on July 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
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This is excellent work! Great!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on July 25, 2009 at 11:13 PM
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OMG
HI I HAVE BEEN GONE SINCE JUN 2007 AND YOU ARE THE SECOND PERSON PAGE I HAVE BEEN ON TONIGHT SINCE I HAVE GOT BACK ON AND ALL I'M GOING TO SAY IS KEEP WRITING BECAUSE THIS POEM WAS MEANT FOR ME...I JUST GOT SUSPENDED FROM WORK FOR THREE DAYS BECAUSE I'M QUICK TO SPEAK AND SLOW TO THINK....THANK U THANK U
posted by
Charnell_Lanay
on July 25, 2009 at 6:43 PM
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posted by
Star5_
on July 25, 2009 at 6:12 PM
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