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Lovely Merkie, refreshing rain does quench thirst for sure.The shape of your poem is awesome.........."the kiss of rain upon the earth".

posted by yellowrose55 on July 8, 2009 at 10:03 PM | link to this | reply

Superbly refreshing...!

posted by Raphael222 on July 7, 2009 at 1:51 PM | link to this | reply

You capture the essence of rain love. BCA, BillJRoost

posted by BC-A on July 7, 2009 at 8:41 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent rain dance
but the rain seems to have got lost and landed here...

posted by lionreign on July 7, 2009 at 6:23 AM | link to this | reply

Merkie, I love the rain dance, sounds thirst quenching and cool. thanks so much for stopping by.

posted by shobana on July 6, 2009 at 11:00 PM | link to this | reply

Very awesome!
 Thanks 





posted by Kolekshuns on July 6, 2009 at 10:36 PM | link to this | reply

Very nice, merkie...

posted by teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade on July 6, 2009 at 10:10 PM | link to this | reply

I love this .. and the shape too - very nicely done.

posted by mneme on July 6, 2009 at 9:02 PM | link to this | reply

Merkie
That was lovely and I really loved the arrangement of the letters like an upside down umbrella.

posted by WileyJohn on July 6, 2009 at 8:20 PM | link to this | reply

I love the rain and I love your poem thanks for sharing.

posted by Chuck_E_Ibrahim on July 6, 2009 at 5:02 PM | link to this | reply

merkie ~.~
It spatters where it matters (most times). Very nice piece. Thanks for sharing. Peace, blessings and understanding.~SS

posted by soulspeaker on July 6, 2009 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

No more rain here please...we had two dry days and now more rain. LOL

posted by Kabu on July 6, 2009 at 12:19 PM | link to this | reply

What a relief rain is after a dry, hot& humid summer day! Lovely!

posted by shamasehar on July 6, 2009 at 11:04 AM | link to this | reply

Great!  The umbrella is a wonderful way to start this poem.
I wish I had a blue one now for walking in the rain. 
Mine is black and reminds me of a funeral dirge.

posted by TAPS. on July 6, 2009 at 10:42 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful my friend!

posted by Chilitree on July 6, 2009 at 10:05 AM | link to this | reply