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Beautiful.. quite charming.
posted by
mneme
on June 27, 2009 at 11:37 PM
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Lovely Merkie...
Jonathan
posted by
Raphael222
on June 27, 2009 at 1:57 PM
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Merkie
Loved your haiku today…..
posted by
Troosha
on June 27, 2009 at 9:32 AM
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I read this as one poem. Was struck by the juxtaposition of images:
crushed beauty/ reflected; satin petals/ furious flame...really woke me up to the inner sounds of cymbals!
posted by
jfm32
on June 27, 2009 at 8:27 AM
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Short and powerful; thanks! Thanks too for commenting on my post. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on June 27, 2009 at 8:03 AM
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merkie, I liked that last one especially...a very beautiful metaphor....
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posted by
Rumor
on June 27, 2009 at 7:52 AM
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beautiful poem merkie ..loved it ..thanks for visiting me ...
the mermaid and the sailor ...
http://www.poemhunter.com/tamara-jay-hanaring-2/
posted by
drohan254
on June 27, 2009 at 2:55 AM
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posted by
Star5_
on June 26, 2009 at 9:34 PM
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Three short meaningful poems merkie.
Loved the last one.
posted by
shobana
on June 26, 2009 at 7:16 PM
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Well done indeed! I liked the third one as well! sam/Shelly
posted by
sam444
on June 26, 2009 at 3:56 PM
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Beautiful...all of them. But must say that number 3 hit me in that "goose bumpy" way
Wonderful work!
posted by
RASSE
on June 26, 2009 at 10:59 AM
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I like all 3
but the third is total genius!
posted by
lionreign
on June 26, 2009 at 10:05 AM
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