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I do remember indeed. Lovely, expressive poem!
posted by
Chilitree
on July 4, 2009 at 9:01 PM
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So Awesome!
Such a deep poem. Great work.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 4, 2009 at 7:00 PM
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That's a pretty nice poem. I remember the tree we used to climb, but it died when my parents had it pruned
. When I turned 21 my dad took me to a bar where all his friends' were. I didn't drink by then, and he bragged about me when I ordered a coke!
posted by
mariposa75
on July 4, 2009 at 10:17 AM
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Birthday America
Shelly Sam444 Enjoyed reminiscing as I red your story poem Wonderful have a happy 4th and enjoy your new garden venture of flowers galore you've planted with joy. Lv. FEmia
posted by
fememefeme
on July 4, 2009 at 9:35 AM
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Blessingto to you Sam444
Happy Independence Day your story poem is very meaningful..My husband has passed and I remember him when his extended tour scared me to pieces then his helicopter was shot down. Memories will sustain all who believe and that and pictures are comforting.Bless you Shelly and your family.Lv. FEmia
posted by
fememefeme
on July 3, 2009 at 8:04 AM
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Awesome....
...As usual.
posted by
Kolekshuns
on July 1, 2009 at 8:55 AM
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Just wondering... ever read Edith Wharton? you might like some of her writing...
posted by
mneme
on June 30, 2009 at 4:19 PM
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I love this line... I'm intrigued... as a reader should be..! it makes you wonder what's coming next..
" unresolved passion of the morning of the roses "
posted by
mneme
on June 30, 2009 at 4:18 PM
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So beautiful - I could visualize the text! Romans 1:18!!
posted by
janey_
on June 28, 2009 at 6:03 PM
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Time Flies
Intresting writing Sam but it was a mind thinker and I enjoyed it..I just came back from my trip and am getting set for reading blog and yours was my first.Femia
posted by
fememefeme
on June 28, 2009 at 12:12 PM
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My imagination soars on this one..leaving me to wonder.
posted by
yellowrose55
on June 24, 2009 at 10:10 PM
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Wonderful! I still remember the intensity of the Bunsen burner in my high school chemistry class. I love what you do in your writing.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 23, 2009 at 4:08 PM
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I love the mysterious way that this blog is set up. It adds to the intrigue and mystique of the poems that are posted as a sort of window into a scenario-there is a partial view of what may have happened here, but that is all we're allowed-a piece at a time.
posted by
calia14
on June 23, 2009 at 8:59 AM
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Reminds me of a romance I had once
never quite resolved.
posted by
Pat_B
on June 23, 2009 at 5:27 AM
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Thank you so much for your invaluable advice. I'll watch out for the 'bespoke arm' and will keep my expectations down. I won't talk to them until I have a very clear synopsis for the book and that will only come when I'm physically in Galicia and get inspired. Thanks again for caring, it's absolutely lovely.
posted by
vogue
on June 23, 2009 at 2:47 AM
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This one is sterling! You are very welcome; it is my pleasure! sam
posted by
sam444
on June 22, 2009 at 9:42 PM
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