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Wow, lots of edge to this view.
posted by
yellowrose55
on August 10, 2009 at 6:14 AM
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Betty, thanks for your comforting words and support---will write soon. Just a quick read today, but enough to say that it's very powerful. Hope all's well with you. Nita.
posted by
Nita09
on June 13, 2009 at 7:38 AM
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Wow! I am captured! The poor soul! Shelly
posted by
sam444
on June 12, 2009 at 3:57 PM
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this one leaves wondering if it was indeed sarah who was the passenger
posted by
Lanetay
on June 12, 2009 at 5:10 AM
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Captivating as usual ...
posted by
afzal50
on June 11, 2009 at 6:39 PM
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I was enthralled reading this.
posted by
FormerStudentIntern
on June 11, 2009 at 3:35 PM
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This is definitely not tame! Quite a compelling read.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 11, 2009 at 12:12 PM
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Re:
Thanks BillJRoost; I'll reread it bearing your comment in mind!
posted by
elinjo
on June 11, 2009 at 11:22 AM
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It’s up to you. Do you like run-on sentences? Truman Capote wrote them in this structure. Or, do you want to clean it up with shorter clearer sentences? Just read it over and see if the content’s clear at the length that youb wrote. BCA, BillJRoost
posted by
BC-A
on June 11, 2009 at 10:12 AM
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