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Re: muser, I recognize this poem and see you've made some wonderful
Thank you Ariala! You are a wonderful editor who taught me that a red pen can be a friend, also! I ain't completely well yet, but I'm getting better! Your words have made my day! I am glad to be back, and I look forward to learning even more from you. You are one bright cookie...and I am blessed to call you friend. muser
posted by
muser
on June 8, 2009 at 8:56 AM
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muser, I recognize this poem and see you've made some wonderful
changes to it, or is it my imagination? I love this one! I hope Max will be okay.
posted by
Ariala
on June 8, 2009 at 8:28 AM
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Very BEST...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 7, 2009 at 6:41 PM
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Muser
What awonderfully loving poem...And please give my very regards and wishes to Max...
posted by
Nautikos
on June 7, 2009 at 6:40 PM
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Muser, I'm very glad this turned out well for you both ..
I can well imagine the fear of losing your loved one... it's at times like these that the memories can be so comforting.. I find blue is so soothing, I love the way you evoke those summer blessings..
"
the memory of that perfect day
comforts me now
in this time of summer lace"
posted by
mneme
on June 6, 2009 at 7:04 PM
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TAPS, I have never taken Max for granted, and I am not going to start now. I am so glad you saw so much in my poem; it was so emotional for me to write. I actually didn't think about what I was writing, but just felt it. thank you for pointing that out for me.muser
posted by
muser
on June 6, 2009 at 7:29 AM
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I'm so glad that you are such an able writer so that you could make note of this incident, your feelings, your memories and your faith, in such an outstandingly beautiful manner.
posted by
TAPS.
on June 5, 2009 at 9:02 PM
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Re: "between life and wait and see"...
It was very intense. The doctor felt everything was ok, that the worst was over, but once we left the emergency room, and Max was in intensive care a couple of days, it all came crashing down on me. I hate to admit it, but my faith was weak for a few days... I think that pink recliner was out to get me. LOL! muser
posted by
muser
on June 5, 2009 at 8:30 PM
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Oh, Wiley, I know the look of "pure dee Love" when I see it, and it is right here on Kabu's beautiful face! AND I bet you have had a grin on your face ever since you said "I DO...well, except for when Mr. Graysome is naughty.Thanks be to God for Kabu being there with you and saving your life. We are all so very blessed. Max and I are not going to give up meeting y'all someday. CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR MARRIAGE!!!!
Max and I are so very happy for you!! There will always be trials in our lives, but ain't the rest grand?!
muser
posted by
muser
on June 5, 2009 at 8:22 PM
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Muser
I am so happy your Max came out of it and you produced such a poem of great feelings of love. We haven't 'spoken' for a long while and I very nearly passed on to another life when I had a massive heart attack 6 months after my love Kabu came here and we've since married. Kabu just happened to be an RN and she saved my life quite literally. Here she is for you to see.
Love ya's.
posted by
WileyJohn
on June 5, 2009 at 6:48 PM
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"between life and wait and see".........that's as clear as you can make it!
posted by
Corbin_Dallas
on June 5, 2009 at 5:27 PM
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