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Re: I feel for you...
Thank you Raphael222, and thanks for visiting.
posted by
mneme
on May 23, 2009 at 9:36 PM
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I feel for you...
posted by
Raphael222
on May 17, 2009 at 5:41 AM
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Re: Emotional piece, mneme
Well spotted, Joe Love... one way of letting it out, without damaging goodwill. Never was one for the 'hell hath no woman' school.
posted by
mneme
on May 16, 2009 at 7:53 PM
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Emotional piece, mneme
I take it that this poem was inspired by "The Heartbreaker" of your other blog??
posted by
Joe_Love
on May 16, 2009 at 5:47 PM
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Power-full!
posted by
MomentsinTime
on May 16, 2009 at 10:20 AM
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Re: Good writing with a lot of emotion
Thanks Norwood.. I played around with it a little, made it a little less choppy (I hope).
posted by
mneme
on May 15, 2009 at 3:15 AM
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Merkie, thanks for visiting and for your comments. I know deep down that you are right. It takes a while of course.
posted by
mneme
on May 15, 2009 at 3:14 AM
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Being in Australia felt like an open prison, for a long time, till I met this man Taps. I've never been in the real kind either - just the metaphorical one.
posted by
mneme
on May 14, 2009 at 3:39 PM
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Those are quite some comparisons there.
Personally, I don't think I'd like prison. Never been there, but I think I'd choose heartbreak over confinement. Good writing.
posted by
TAPS.
on May 14, 2009 at 2:37 PM
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Lots of feeling to work through and see reason for the abandoned relationship. Always another door opening !
posted by
merkie
on May 14, 2009 at 10:15 AM
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Good writing with a lot of emotion
however some of the structure needs tightening. I am guilty myself so should not talk I guess.
Good writing and thanks for dropping by my blogs.
posted by
Norwood
on May 14, 2009 at 8:15 AM
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